Black Poetry : Glimpse

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I catch a glimpse of you
    nearly everyday.
    Are you real?
    Are you always this way?
    Or am I making you
    into a fantasy man?
    I'll try to describe him
    if I can.....
    But, I'm not so sure
    about this man.
    He looks like a caramel
    chocolate treat.
    Does the same sweetness
    flow from head to feet,
    and all points in between?
    Those lips of his,
    soft as I've ever seen.
    Can his kiss captivate this
    starry eyed queen?
    Can his sultry voice
    cause an eargasm
    causing my body
    to weaken and spasm?
    Can the ebony eyes mirror
    my soul, to blend
    with yours and make
    them whole?
    These questions I ask
    myself everytime I get
    a glimpse of you....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....da visional looking glass of a mystery
    tyte scribe
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always nice to get props from you, Rich. Glad you liked it.
     
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    where he at?!
    lol this is very good!
     
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    [email protected]....could be anywhere, could be everywhere....Thank you flojo.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop...
    likes this flow....Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you liked the drop, mzblkangel. I appreciate your words.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your welcome :D
     
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    a glimpse..this was beautiful..flow on!

    Phenessy
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you think so, Phenessy, thank you so much.
     
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