Black Poetry : Glare

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  1. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    Glare



    Up at the ceiling I sit and stare, every once and in a while I’ll look down to glare, knowing it’s not fair, because you two make the perfect pair, leaving me here to take glances, knowing there’ll be no chances, but it makes me sick, to see you in love with another chick, I ask myself “why?” a lot, like why you haven’t you given “US” a shot, like why can’t that be me, and why is it me that he can’t see, could their love be that deep, are my feelings for him really this steep, only my heart knows, and my mind only knows what the heart shows, sometimes I think I’m a little insane, because watching you and her brings me pain, unimaginable pain, sometimes I don’t know how I manage to maintain, so many times I’ve prayed for him, but the chances seem so slim, the reality appears to stay dim, but in the back of my mind there’s always him, and then there’s her right beside her man, some things I just don’t understand, like him and her being together
    I know things don’t last forever, so when is it my turn, please hurry up before my heart begin to burn, from all these emotions, when from him I’m getting no commotion, and sure as hell aint getting a promotion, seems everything is going in slow motion, now from the ceiling I take my glare, but this time I see you and me in this pair, so happy we seem to be, to bad this **** aint reality.​
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...
    keep on flowin..
     
  3. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    . thank you ma'am .
     
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    this was so moving...all the questions
    and the echo of the hearts searching
    ...very real with great imagery...
    loved your flow...
     
  5. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    . thank u also .
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
    i like dis
     
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    this was
    Simply beautiful
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    NICE. Im feeling you on this one.