Black Poetry : Glacier

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Nov 15, 2005.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am on a iceberg feeling kind of cold
    I need something warm to ease my soul

    So can you take a hold of me?
    Just creep into this ecstasy
    And flow into the river
    Of the defrost ice with me

    Can you laid me down ?
    Just take my body now
    Caress me in a nature
    That will surely melt this glacier
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Allow me to enter
    your space on
    that glacier
    to warm and trace
    bring warmth to ya soul
    and sheild u from da cold

    yes i can slide right in
    caress ya ecstacy
    take that dip into river
    of beauty as i defrost

    And lay u down slowly
    cover u in nudity of comfort
    caress you gently to a
    warm feel that will heat up
    to a sesation thrill as it melts
    drift away as our bodies lay
    yes
     
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    This was sensually smooth, the visuals were captivating.
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich
    You are more then welcome
    to come upon this glacier
    and warm the soul
    that feels so cold
    into a blissful tranquilty
    and drip into the river
    into a new adventure
    of the deep blue sea
    Yes
    lay me down
    and kiss away my flown
    and enter into a sensation
    that will defrost this glacier :)

    Thank you dear brother for flowing
    with me..
    HI sista wazi
    thank you so much dear sister,
    I felt a chill and need some defrosting..lol:)
    Thank you so much for the love
    Thank you poets so much for sharing your love and your thoughts

    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As a new beginning start
    as i come to comfort da heart
    sheer it from da cold
    caress deep down in da soul
    for a bliss of steamy glist
    to melt the block of ice
    let me kiss u there
    run my finger through ya hair
    tell u i'll always be
    and cover you gentle and sweet
    yes i'll come release thee
    from the Glacier u have bared
    and take u high above into my
    tender love of heat
    come here my humble sweet.
     
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    smooth as always sista...
    melt dat ice...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    smooth and peace...
    enjoyed your flow sis
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich :)

    Just loving the comfort
    feeling the warmth
    taking away the chill I don't want
    gentle kisses, tender caresses
    releasing the everyday stresses
    melting the cold taking away the chill
    The rays of the sun is what i feel
    love me tender, love me strong
    in your arms is where I belong:)

    Thank you for flowing in the warmth :)

    Hi Brotha Khasm13
    lol..Yeah . Just wanna over come big chill
    and feel the warmth :)
    Thank you for the love brother

    Hi Sister MzBlkAngel
    Thank you for the love on my flow sis,
    I'm happy you enjoed it :)
     
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    Sista...can you teach me to be this smooth
    because...I can only aspire
    I am loving this flow
    in all the glory of it's simplicity
    and power...

    Loving it!
    Sage
     
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    *exhale* the shades of Blue you give us sistah Bluewater :)

    they are so moving...

    did you ever do your CD?

    I'd love to hear your audios sister :)