Black Poetry : GIVING UP YOUR *** IN 24 HRS OR LESS

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  1. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEFORE YOU GO THROUGH THE DRAMA (WHAT PART DID YOU PLAY?)

    IT'S FUNNY HOW YOU SAY I USED YOU
    BECAUSE YOU HAD TO GET UP AND GO HOME BEFORE MORNING SET END
    BUT YOU PUT YOURSELF OUT THERE TO BE USED,
    FU%KING ME, BEFORE A RELATIONSHIP COULD EVEN BEGAN

    YOU BARELY EVEN KNEW MY NAME, BUT YOU WERE SO DESPERATE TO CLAIM ME AS YOUR MAN
    RUNNING BACK TO YOUR GIRLFRIEND, BRAGGING HOW YOU JUST HAD TO SEE WHAT WAS IN MY PANTS

    ALL YOU SAW OF ME WAS HOW YOU COULD BENEFIT FROM MY REALITY,
    AND BECAUSE OF THAT YOU SACRIFICE YOUR SELF RESPECT AND YOUR DIGNITY

    IS THAT HOW YOU LOST YOUR VIRGINITY, FORFEITING FORMALITIES
    NOW YOU WANT TO, BLAME ME, FOR WHAT YOU GAVE UP FOR FREE

    IN LESS THAN 24 HOURS
    YOU WERE RIDING IN MY NEW CAR, FU%KING IN MY CONDO,
    YOU CALLED YOURSELF MY WOMAN, BUT ACTING DESPERATE LIKE A CRACKWHO%RE

    THIS IS NOT ABOUT ME AND YOU HAVING A ONE NIGHT STAND
    WE NEVER EXCHANGED NUMBERS, BECAUSE YOU WERE ON A DAYLIGHT SAVING PLAN

    IN LESS THAN A NIGHT, YOU CREATED YOUR REALITY, THROUGH ME
    IN LESS THAN AN HOUR TIME, IN YOU I CREATED MY FANTASY

    SO I'M ASKING YOU
    WHAT DO YOU KNOW ABOUT ME?
    NOTHING,
    BECAUSE YOU NEVER ASK
    I GUESS GETTING TO KNOW ME, WAS MORE COMPLICATED THAN GIVING UP YOUR AS%

    WHEN IS MY BIRTHDAY, WHAT COLLEGE OR HIGH SCHOOL DID I ATTEND,
    WHAT'S MY FAVORITE MEAL, WHO IS MY BEST FRIEND?

    DO I HAVE A WOMAN, A DISEASES,OR HAVE I EVER DONE ANY JAIL TIME?
    DO I HAVE ANY BABY MOMMA'S DRAMA, OR KIDS THAT I SAY ISN'T MINES

    YOU INTRODUCE ME TO YOUR A%S FIRST, NEVER MAKING ME INTERESTED IN KNOWING YOUR MIND
    I WAS A QUICK FIX, TO YOUR GOAL, NOW YOU ACT IF THOUGH I COMMITTED THE CRIME

    YOU SAID I'VE DISRESPECTED YOU, BUT WHEN DID YOU RESPECT YOURSELF
    IF YOU'RE NOT RESPECTING YOU, THAN HOW DO YOU EXPECT ANYONE ELSE


    FOR ALL THE WOMEN WHO READ THIS PIECE,

    DON'T TRY TO MAKE SOMEONE ELSE'S SH%T YOUR OWN,

    IF YOU DIDN'T WORK FOR IT OR CONTRIBUTE TO IT, MAKE SACRIFICES FOR IT, THEN YOU ARE ONLY BORROWING IT,

    IT IS NOT YOURS TO KEEP,

    SO DON'T SACRIFICE YOUR SELF RESPECT FOR IT.

    YOUR AS% IS NOT A RECEIPT OR A DOWN PAYMENT,
    YOU CAN'T USE YOUR AS% TO PUT A DEPOSIT ON YOUR LIFE WORTH

    BUT YOU CAN,
    GET OFF YOUR AS%

    AND

    HAVE YOUR, OWN, GET YOUR OWN, HOLD ON TO YOUR OWN
    SO YOUR WILL BE ABLE TO STAND UP ON YOUR OWN

    LOVE YOURSELF, RESPECT YOURSELF AND EDUCATE YOURSELF,
    SO THE NEXT MAN WILL SEE
    THAT YOU DON'T NEED HIS SH%T, BECAUSE YOU GOT YOUR OWN REALITY

    STOP USING YOUR BODY AS A HUMAN OUTLET
    LETTING ANY AND EVERYTHING PLUG INTO YOU
    TREAT YOURSELF WITH RESPECT 1ST, SO DISRESPECT WON'T COME IN YOU


    © Copyright 2004 by FINDLOVEINME
     
  2. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this one... its nice ot see the whole one night stand thing in a males perspective..... thanks for the drop
     
  3. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reply to FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME, Truth comes in many forms
    Today some woman have lowered their norms
    The truth that you breath indeed is too real
    Some women are so desperate they offer at steal

    Great poem you have made
    Now go and seize a great day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You

    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!-------Thank You
     
  4. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW, I REALLY ENJOYED THIS TIGHT PIECE. EVERY WORD THAT YOU WROTE IS SO VERY TRUE, AND I MUST SAY I DO AGREE. WOMAN NEED TO LOVE AND RESPECT THEMSELVES FIRST, THEREFORE WHEN THEY ARE APPORACHED BY SOMEONE TRYING TO DISRESPECT THEM, THEY KNOW HOW TO HANDLE THEMSELVES. IT'S GOOD TO SEE IT FROM A MAN PROSPECTIVE, AND LET WOMAN KNOW THAT MEN REALLY WON'T RESPECT YOU AFTER HAVING A ONE NIGHT STAND, AND THAT THEY REALLY WILL THINK YOU ARE SOME TYPE OF DESPRATE FREAK, THANKS FOR LETTING US KNOW, NOW WOMAN WON'T HAVE TO HAVE AN FALSE SENSE OF HOW MEN WILL SEE THEM. MUCH LOVE AND MANY BLESSING. PEACE

    POETIC_DIVA

    "I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST, WHICH STRENGHTENS ME" PHILP 4:13
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 awesome flow and looking at it from the inside tyteeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
  6. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE REPLIES, I REALLY WASN'T SURE ABOUT POSTING THIS PIECE, BECAUSE I DIDN'T WANT TO OFFEND ANYONE. ALL I AM SAYING IS THAT WHEN YOU EXPECT BENEFITS FOR GIVING UP YOUR BODY IN THAT AMOUNT OF TIME, THEN YOU ARE SELLING YOURSELF WORTH. ANYTHING THAT IS WORTH HAVING IS WORTH WAITING FOR.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow....You spelled it out, plain, for all to see. If you sell yourself cheap, that's what you'll be seen as, yes....I'm giving you a standing ovation for this one....bravo!!!!
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...vivid...i liked it...
     
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    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like my kind of woman.
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    I just got to hear you
    read this in chat!!!!

    Please do join us sometimes!!!!

    Tyte piece!!!!!!!
     
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