Quiet Poetry Lounge : Giving U My Heart

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NDeep, May 23, 2003.

  1. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can see us holding hands in the park
    I can see you kissing me in the dark
    I can see myself giving you my :heart:

    I can feel our souls making love constantly
    I can feel you living inside of me
    I can feel myself giving you my :heart:

    I can imagine us being together forever
    I can imagine you making me better
    I can imagine myself giving you my :heart:

    I can hear us listening to one another issues
    I can hear my angels whispering to me when I'm with you
    "You're going to give this one your :heart:"
     
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    NDeep,

    This is the most loving peace. You've given us the best part of you!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    i like sweet i love the simple things in love that savor the sweetes tast yeah i like
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know i loved dis here a lover man myself
    keep flowin'
     
  5. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx guys....He's my very special perfect one!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed hold him close and love him as u love thou self
     
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    I luved that so much. Real powerful an beautiful piece. Keep flowin'
     
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    Beautiful, beautiful, beautiiiiiiiiiiiiful
    Peace
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi N DEEP,

    This is such a lovely sweet piece. It warmed by heart. I wish you and your "special" one all the best!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'preciate it guys!
     
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