Black Haiku : Giving It A Shot!??!?!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Royal_T, Mar 10, 2003.

  1. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destiny is ours,
    To take over this foul world
    Get in line for yours.




    I want to love you
    But I don't know how you work.
    I'll need instructions.



    I am lost in now,
    Trying to turn around, how?
    My northstar, God's smile.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen stroking sweet
    u hit it on the head too
    flow to perfection


    be not to a lost
    da northstar above shinning
    your guide upon he

    loveth from da heart
    surely it will work self out
    instruction be not


    love how u laid these three to perfection keep flowin ....Poet !
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's love RICH...thanks...i still will work to get my Haiku's like your yo....i haven't done that since 3rd grade....

    lol:D
     
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    makes u feel like a happy child when u flow dis way
    I like to express self in dis form ....Thank u
    we gotta do a collab together on one soon !
     
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    For sure...I also see that you're from Chicago, I'm working on getting a small venue going for minds like ours. The suburbs are a bit dry, so when this theatre thing gets going (hopefully), I'll expect you there to spit some of your stuff...and we'll definitely work on the collaboration thing.....

    Royal T.
     
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    indeed i will come just let me know the date ....
    i can get some of the other close by to drop in with me
     
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    Hello Royal T...
    I'm no haiku pro, but I think these are great shots!

    I'm feelin' this one

    "I want to love you
    But I don't know how you work.
    I'll need instructions."

    BTW... I love your avatar


    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
  8. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i appreciate that Coco...and that avatar....I struggled to find one that was decent. Looking for anything black was difficult and the good ones, you have to pay for...I'm not down for that.

    Stay up.

    Royal T.
     
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    instruction within
    just ask me forth i be here
    i am the way in
     
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    Stop, Look and Listen.
    To important life lessons.
    Or Be Stuck at go.
     
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