Black Poetry : GIVE ME U

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Give me you to love
    give me you to cherish
    give me you to behold
    give me you beloveth

    I shell never know of thee
    deepest of love unil one
    in fulliness learn to cry
    in my arms

    I will never my dearest
    stand before you empty
    but bring all my heart
    to be your homeland

    Give me you and grant
    me this one joy
    so that u may blossom
    into my summer flower

    when u art ready
    just write me in YES
    ink of climson tide
    and remove my silver-grey
     
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    Yes, I have given you me to love
    Yes, I have given you me to cherish
    Yes, I have given you me to behold
    Yes, and yes my beloved for I am all yours.
    The whole of me

    I have come to you
    with everything naked and brand new
    my eyes...my heart wide open
    and I shall cry tears of joy
    while living in your arms
    where peace can cover me

    bring me your heart
    and I will empty it of all pain
    for I have been given a mission
    to love you so deeply
    and abundantly completely
    every day...every night
    in every way

    Yes, my precious black man
    I am ready to share with you
    my love, my peace and my joy

    When you are ready to experience
    a love designed specifically for you
    from above and beyond
    just write me in Yes
    ink of crimson tides
    so that we can live out of love
    well passed our silver and grey
     
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    Chevron Dove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really nice!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you sister Totalview for the feedback it was off da hook

    Thank you sister Chevron Dove for the visit inside my space....