Black Poetry : GIVE ME U...

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know it hasn't been long enough for us to mend

    since I last saw you my heart been twisted within
    leaving a feeling is it right or a sin

    I miss you to the point I am loosing all sanity,
    There has to be an end to all this calamity.
    I think of you every second and every breath,
    For you I would stare into the face of death.

    To kiss your lips is to taste the sweetness of love,
    And it brings forth feelings from the heavens above.

    To look into your eyes is to gaze into the sky,
    So beautiful with the stars and the heavens inside.
    To see your smile is to see the great warmth of divine,
    for it flickers like summer sunshine of all time

    To touch you is like soft clouds of affection
    the way you lay back is an sensual direction
    maybe i'm just filled with too much compassion
    but I still wear you like a new style and fashion

    The very first day i said you was mines
    by fate or love even by design , I wait !
    If it take me til forever and forever turns into never
    my love just that strong and never won't be that long

    I will spool my love into a web to net you in my arms
    if not but for a moment to feel the embrace
    in harmony of your rapid beat upon the cluster of yo breast
    just to brisk my hands cross da curves of your open roads
    thinking of it all has made me str8 of an arrow
    pointing at your slumbering treasure chest , "if i was only da key"

    I would open your world up to happiness and grace
    so you may feel da cares of me and my goodness of true love
    be yo badge of honor and prefection of atraction to the womb

    when you ready to love and be loved completely beyond fears
    i'll be one name, a call, inches and a smile away, (waiting)
    inside my chambers at da temple of love beside da waterfall
    under da bridge or walking through da garden of your love lace

    Da choice you choose is now my fate wit faith,hope n' prayer
    when da lioness call i hope i'm da answer
    GIVE ME YOU !


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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    My Lord! Give me her phone number! I'll call her and ask her to PLEASE take ya back! You need another chance! :lol:

    And as I read, I heard the Temptations singing "This Is My Promise!"

    Whew! I want you two to be together!
     
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    This was quite beautiful, to miss someone that much, we've all been there, this was so gracefully flowed poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If i had one to give i would cherryblossom....lol....maybe she might hear my echos
    of a divine promise.

    Missing the goodness of a graceful love do this to a heart u know watz maybe i can
    fix it and change things in a direction if not the love still remains until my day so i wait.Thankz a million
     
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    Well, Lord knows, I'm rooting for ya!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol......see that's y you my girl u on my side keep rooting somebody might hear da hoorays !!

    u know u something else don't cha ! thankz again
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    all right now

    :terrific:

    i hope you get the call
     
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    I do too so'ja cause man i sho nuff want to be the one to say H_E_L_L_OOOOOO!!!!!!
     
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    If i could only have you
    I would give da world
    if for one moment of us
    to share all the joys
    I would treasure it
    give me you !
     
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    I'll give you me if I thought it would
    take away the pain and fill the void.
    I'd give you me in a heart beat because the passion
    is so deep and real that only one's heart can feel the depth
    of your emotion. I give you me unconditionally and fully.
    As long as I know you are giving you to me.

    :em2900: You are too much $$R$$ that was deep.