Black Poetry : Give me the Sun......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jul 27, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel it here ...
    i feel it...
    Come over here ..
    i hear it..
    Wanna go there to see it
    Its getting closer..
    the beating of her heart
    i hear her calling me...

    I gues its time to heal it
    Can,t fight against my spirrit...
    Runfree like a filly..
    I feel like a slave of modernism..
    something is missing..
    i wanna go Home..
    so..

    Give me the Sun...
    Give me the place where i belong..
    Give me the ground..
    that made me strong..
    Give me the Sun

    To her i am a stranger..
    cause i have left my culture..
    Forgive my strange behaviour..
    it wasnt my fault..
    Now i,m crying on her shoulders...
    cause Beauty couldn,t stop my tears..
    and i,m here to see that..

    Give me the Sun...
    Give me the Place where i belong..
    Give me the air that Raptures my blood.
    Give me the Sun...

    Now i am here to face it..
    Paridise looks with Grace..
    though some have come trough changes..
    enjoy whats left in ages..
    I feel the Force of nature..
    unbelievable.. wonderfull..

    Land of All..........
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was really good
    i feel ya sentiment here...
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you roam we get a charge!
     
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    this feels like a song, its soo beautiful :)
     
  5. triniti424

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    I agree wit SwT this was like a homecoming song :)
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sweety,s i cant waitttttttttttttttttttttt.
    i,m moving next year to .......sun ....

    swt t thanks for that cpmliment....
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

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    very nice...
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a nice poem, i like,

    much love,
    -story
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks story and luvlygolden :heart:
     
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    this is a nice poem sis
    feeling the healing warmth
    Peace
    Blue :heart: