Black Poetry : Give me reason

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Give me reason that
    everythin aint deceivin
    tryin to wash away
    the pain and heal..
    skin peelin and
    life is derailed….
    A broken smile
    as words pass
    clouds pour the
    days are darker…..
    the love is gone…
    within the
    star the light is out..
    as the wind blow cold….
    Harsh and deceivin.
    try to be But cant….

    Give me reason that
    everythin aint deceivin
    lookin ova the rainbow….
    But cant get there
    to climb …for the dark
    opposed the light..and the
    soul drown…within defeat…
    as the soul only knows betrayal
    lies and wrong doers…..
    the dream is crushed….
    And the sun just wont shine…
    turns dark….as the trees die
    and leaves fade….
    Give me reason that
    everythin aint deceivin
    just give one…as the waterfalls
    dry…and the sun hides…….

    Give me reason that
    everythin aint deceivin
    cherish the air you breath….
    Before its taken away
    The water you drink
    Before it dries up
    And the love you get….
    Before it goes
    And show the love you have…
    Within self the pain will heal
    And the sun will shine
    For once its gone its gone…

    Give me reason that
    everythin aint deceivin


    blackangel thang....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was well done and felt
    so true once it's gone it's gone
    reasons of seasons
    within self is the answers
    wow !!!!
    like dis here
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One reason is... that you have made my day!
     
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    very nice flow
    nice one
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam for the love on dis
    Peace and love to yall
    Angel
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A lot want when they no longer have & don't want when they do have.

    Feelin' this.
     
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    Simply marvelous!

    Stay focused!
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PositiveMindset
    Ujima

    thank you both for the love on dis
    Peace Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartfelt and bitter sweet....flow on.
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh lord. I know I don't have to tell you, sister, how much I'm feelin this one. Beautiful flow - off the hook. wow
     
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