Black Poetry : GIVE ME A SIGN

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Under da crimson blue
    out of nowhere a potential you
    side by side just us two
    gave me feeling of something new
    it was radiant yet vibrant too
    mask in notions of I love u
    left in wonderment beyond a clue
    tell me what should my heart do

    Unto my day came this light
    wit words intently and sensually right
    conforting me in warm delight
    Made my love set it's sight
    upon a woman ever so bright
    built in a passion sweetly tyte
    she's amazing like summer night

    Glazing sensual bedroom eyez
    deep brown to my surprise
    extreme beauty to mesmerize
    hypnoticly in depth my spirit rize
    she compose a heart one to love
    wit a charmming soul to hug
    give me a sign from high above

    She truely a treasure to be sought
    that has my love now En route
    surely a queen of blazing fire
    made for a king now my greatest desire
    her cascading dew a man could admire
    a goddess mistress , a sunflower
    give me a sign this very hour
    as i retire into my slumber
    i'll dreameth of tis love ever so humble

    Give me a sign
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    push / bump / i see a sign of potential
     
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    If i had a clue a sign a note
    I would know of who and what
    my love is just waving and lost
    show me da sign !
     
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    You are amazing too with ur flow.it can touch soul, heart and spirit.
     
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    Happy you enjoyed this one , it's a feeling a had when i first saw such image
    through a vision of my dreams , thank u Ashley87
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very, very, very beautiful poem
    this is truely one of my favorites for 2010
    I love it
    I will do a special part to this piece later
    take care rich.:SuN030:
     
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    wow thankz and i can't wait to see it .....
    much love my dear
     
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    This potential me
    has found you roaming under the crimson blue
    giving you something true and new
    entrapping your love with sweet confessions of "I love you"

    convincing your heart that I am worthy, and to embrace me
    try not to become confused because I am giving you so many clues
    With your heart
    I'm asking you to accept the
    to respond to me in a way you have never done before
    As I'm giving you these bedroom eyes
    take me tonight!

    Give off your light unto me as I have done to you
    Let our love burst under the summer night
    allow me to give your days new meanings of motivation and delight
    God approves of us
    that is the sign
    so let us be
    what our emotions will allow us to be
     
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    GETTOAMBITION

    :qqb015:

    Beyond da tides, I see u there
    potentially with something sweet 2 share
    A greater love of a beginning new
    from what I confess is all about you

    My love for you is getting stronger
    I can't hide it any longer
    us together in crimson blue
    will be Gods Glory of something true

    Each moment dat we apart
    deep feeling linger sensually hard
    your my light when it's dark
    the one now who holds my heart

    In da depth of them eyez
    callin me into a blissful surprise
    they speak wit words unspoken
    now open ya heart to my love token

    Let me take you upon my drift
    spool in rapture and my beautiful uplift
    let me be your silent gift
    and taste my erotic kiss

    Be my everlasting
    don't denounce me into lonely pasture
    for today i'm yours to treasure
    and you'll be my greatest pleasure
    potential U.
     
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    $$RICH$$

    :qqb018:
    You have found me
    with your eyes and soul
    I will no longer drift away along with the strong current
    we have discovered a greater love with a new beginning

    For what I feel is all because of you
    My love for you is no secret
    For it grows uncontrollably

    Don't hesitate the need to touch me
    whenever you want me, call me
    I will be there to satisfy the in every way

    And when you grow blind with darkness
    I will pull you into my light
    No longer will you have to wait for me
    I give you my heart

    I am your everlasting
    take me on your loves journey
    Let me have you not just for today
    but forever
    you will be my long lasting pleasure​
     
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