Black Poetry : give me a shot

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Dec 22, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    grab a drink smoke
    bar
    whatevea u do soda
    feel this

    6 minutes


    Give me a shot


    One shot
    Of v vodka
    Spit it out
    Vomit aggression
    Obsession
    This lesson, I’m stressing

    Sparking blunts high
    Smoke fades away
    Pollutes
    Lights flicker
    Another ******
    So they figure

    I’m just another lost soul
    Pass by with jackets when I’m cold
    A long road
    Another episode of a black male
    Gets old
    Pottery can’t form this mold

    Two shots of henn
    Don p, still don don’t see me
    Get it, all my memories on the ps
    Playing bones
    Now we chrome
    I remember
    Nba live or in the zone

    Madden
    New rap beginning
    Cartridges to compact innings
    Scoreboard who’s winning
    We both the same, both sinning
    Pass by me, grinning

    Believe me, when u see me
    What you see in me
    You still chu-b-b
    D, or do you feel [pain from glee]
    In your heart, I see,
    You saying speak to me

    Three shots
    Tell me I should feel sorry
    Like I left hood for digital, Atari
    Feel me, mix tapes told me is war g
    You used to fear none, why u barre me
    So many unknown feelings in the starry

    Night….
    Flight
    Fly with me, soar, we can
    Birds, explore
    Hawks, hunt
    Stunted
    Claim
    Blocks, territory
    Run
    Fields
    Swim ocean
    Rest in starry
    Night…..
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaa!!
    dis was str8 banging
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this wow
    nice flow indeed
     
  4. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling ya flow!!!!
     
  5. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    dude...
    i followed this flow...
    it reminds me of my college years
    drink, smoke, sega, sex...thas all it was...lol
    tyte one son
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a nice one here...flow more..feeling you on this
    Peace
     
  7. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rhythmic Flowing Soaring Flights of Joy & Sorrow
    A Bold Strong Soul Seizing & Shaping Tomorrow

    I Lubbz dis herer' Scribe
    Write On!
     
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