Black Poetry : girl troubles

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  1. oddball193

    oddball193 New Member MEMBER

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    A Tear

    Bounce! Slam!
    ****! Bam!
    I have not
    enough strength to throw the ****ing ball through the roof.
    **** You! I hit
    the bag sways
    I cannot summon enough power to break the ****ing chain.
    And that ******* bag- ****- STOP MOVING! Today
    the sweat pours
    in my knuckles- Blood, it mixes
    for hours and hours.
    Who are you?
    And You? Who is this?
    I made you and how you repay me is this ****?
    How rude- You ignored me
    a crude cold shoulder and why- I can't conceive.
    Who the hell is he
    you just want my attention.
    Well, You've got it I hope you're ****ing happy.
    I just went into remission- Into my Black Mind.
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you lost yourself,
    you lost your mind.
    hear her out,
    take some time.
    to get to know,
    the human which you seek.
    using all that profanity,
    is no way to speak.
    but yet i understand,
    what your going through.
    although i'm a girl,
    i feel you........................(take it easy,flow on)
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is raw! Close your eyes count to ten. You are in a good place...Welcum to DESTEE's
     
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    oddball193 New Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate all of the responses! Thanx for reading my poem.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome ! welcome !! welcome!!!

    welcome to destee's playground of love here
    upon family & friendz
    enjoy ya stay and continue what u feel
    i feel u here and what u mean
    but relax it's gonna be o'k
    so flow on let it out express self dat's what it's about !
    welcome to destee...............:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: !!
     
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