Black Poetry : "girl on the side..."

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Aug 25, 2004.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    it wasn't the rule
    to share my deepest thoughts with you...
    you with me..
    l wasn't supposed to listen...
    we promised to be soul- resistant...

    that was the rule made law
    until the night we made love with so much suggestion that...
    resistance became a theory of skepticism and question
    ....l make the riddling confession after so
    much time spent with you that
    l need you....

    by my side
    to my side
    with my side

    girl on the side
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    dis was heavy short to da point
    feeling u here bruh
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely posed...
    emotions flowing...
    likes the scribe....
    gone on tell it !!!
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's a dangerous game to play
    Mr. Biggs taught u dat!! :lol"

    thanx $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like she became an addiction, it's like that sometimes....right to the point. Flow on poet.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, this is amazing, brother. Heavy, tight and simple delivery. Elegant and exquisite. :teach:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, it's a dangerous game in more ways than one...cause it keeps ya on the run. nice drop indeed. I like your style.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow... :jawdrop:

    ....give me a moment :spin: I'm reeling...
    ...these lines are too powerful and cleverly written...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew...ok

    Whooooooooooooaaaa….

    …trying to be soul-resistant to denied…
    yet undeniable
    Con-souling, soul confessions…



    “Jehiah…” :spinstar:

    …made love with so much suggestion, that it’s real…?(whoa…)

    This peace is what I call TNT
    Taboo but (hella) Tyte…


    Relating... ~A~​




    00000000000000
     
  10. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some connections have only one logical resolution. This made me warm. Great flow, poet.


    LOL @ Sage!
     
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