Black Poetry : Gifts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Feb 27, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for 2 whose gifts to each other, still inspires me...


    he gave her naked~rain~dancing
    and "Nina"
    and sweet, sleepless
    nights that went on
    forever

    as they explored
    the
    pleasures
    of
    touching
    together

    feeding each other
    pretty poetry
    drinking the juice
    of
    ecstasy

    strange, how
    time/space
    can rearrange
    the juxtaposition
    is not the same

    but in their heart of hearts
    there’s been no change

    he still recites the way
    she sways
    she still burns candles
    while "Nina" plays

    when clouds hang low
    with coming rain
    she feels him naked~dancing
    again


    Alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    please, let me be the first to say how beautiful this piece is, alyce. thank you for blessin' us all with this heyah...yes, indeed.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    Your pen is mighty on this piece....

    Very, very kewl flow!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there's never a last dance in love.

    glad to read you again.
    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis reminds me of a stormy naked dance Alyce u pen a perfect
    picture in motion
     
  6. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is love... and I agree with J'hiah... there's never a "last dance"... wooooweee!

    S-M :heart:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce.


    have i ever told you that sometimes its difficult
    for me to describe just how wonderful your
    scribes are?? (well it's true)... thank you for
    continuing to share!! you tru-ly inspire! :)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  8. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'll have to say ditto...the love never ends...keep dancing, gurl!

    dee
     
  9. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are Poetry

    and Poetry is you!!!

    Always taking it to another level
     
  10. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this gem of poetry is so beautiful in it's simplicity..so powerful in it's meaning..

    you do what you do...so well!

    k
     
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