Khasm13 : gifted ghetto supahero: soul eternal (episode iv) *caution* rated R

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    ---------------- time for some action-------------------


    breaking through the stratosphere
    i pinpoint positions in the western hemisphere
    oh yeah oh yeah
    it’s time for some action
    so let’s get ready to rumble
    i got the louie bat
    cause they have no meaning of the word humble
    theses cats are about to tumble
    and get broken down like the rubble
    in da projectz
    all wicked men will soon be extinct
    like the ty rex
    so who’s next?

    this owner of the new quark times
    has been propagating lies
    and has ties with the devil himself
    cause he sold his soul for the money wealth
    and da power to control mindz
    his bright ruby red aura gave me the sign
    so i snuck up from behind
    in supa stealth mode
    with dexterity that’s untold
    and followed this cat for a day
    just to see what perversions he had to say
    not to my dismay
    he took a payday
    mr. shadetree x
    to print this top story next
    “affirmative action a bust
    cause blacks act too lax”
    with my supa patience i waited
    even though i was heated to da max
    i just took out da louie wood
    and applied some wax
    stacks upon stacks of untruths
    fell from his mouth like a loose tooth
    but still i waited until he was alone
    with his lawyer on da phone
    when i broke out of stealth mode
    the cosmic light shone

    hey man this is bout to get heavy
    with all your devilish acts dun
    i hope that you are ready
    to meet your maker
    then meet your boy
    co-conspirer in your ploys
    i peeped you playing people like toys
    then tossing them away real coy
    and getting people drunk with lies like a
    rob roy

    *****
    feel the wrath of the wood
    for doing no good

    *****
    feel the wrath of the wood
    for doing no good

    *****
    feel the wrath of the wood
    for doing no good

    *****
    feel the wrath of the wood
    for doing no good

    twirling the bat like num-chucks
    this cat screamed
    oh my God what the ****
    then my wood antimatter bat struck
    breaking 4 ribs on his left side
    then i slid to the right side
    and took the hind side
    of the bat and jabbed him in his right eye
    stumbling and staggered
    suddenly looking haggard
    i said take this you braggart
    With a devastating arc of the bat
    i cracked his back
    in two
    then split his skull
    letting his jellied brain goo
    out onto the hardwood floor
    he was barely still alive
    so i said take this you spiritual whore
    and shoved my bat up his core
    to straighten him out
    this for the casualties of your war
    as his lawyer heard it all
    from the phone on da floor…

    da saga continues…
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amazing as always Khasm anticipating the next volume peace and blessins keep flowin :)
     
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    all i can say is dayuuuuuum, that was tyte. much love. keep hittin em w/the truth :)
     
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    WOW.....that left me speechless....tyte scribe..
     
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    thanks mi familia...

    soul eternal is just getting started...
    just to let ya'll know
    there will be some episodes
    containing violence...
    parental discretion is advised....
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Tight flow....beautiful written.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
  7. Khasm13

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    thanks money...
    i swear when i get set up right i'll be in da
    voice chat piece droppin bombs...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...... speachless.

    :heart:
     
  9. Khasm13

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    thanks cindy...
    this beez my personal quest...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    wow! I sure hope he learns this lesson in humility
    and modesty that you served up like a champ.
    keep fighting for what's right...
    Pace.
     
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