Khasm13 : gifted ghetto supahero:soul eternal (episode 1)

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  1. Khasm13

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    -----------------------da origin-----------------------------------

    deep within the bowels of the robert taylor homes
    is were crackheads dwell and gangsters roam
    i beez here too
    credit to f*cked up to get a loan
    out of this dirty *** zoo
    i work hard to earn change
    and wish that i could start life anew
    rearrange my opportunities and go to school
    and get away from these cats murdering people over jewels
    cause cash rules
    everything around me
    the smell of piss in the stairwell surrounds me
    my days are never balmy
    then one day
    the cosmic spice found me
    and welcomed me into the colony
    that’s when da dismal darkness broke out on me
    and the Lords spotlight was shot on me

    sitting on my couch watching the fresh prince
    sipping on some apple juice with a wince
    is when this thing came crashing through my window
    then dug itself into
    my wall
    burning embers fell onto my basketball
    making the air release
    the flaming object spit the wig piece
    of the Fredrick Douglas picture i had hanging
    all this commotion had my head banging
    plus the cold wind was clanging
    my indoor wind chimes
    i’d had some crazy times
    but this sh#t beats them all
    i get up off the floor and walk to the wall
    as the last of the air left out my basketball
    a glowing green grapefruit size
    cosmic rock meets my eyes
    the closer i get
    the more it feels like my brain fries
    for some reason i touch it
    then my soul cries
    i black out
    as my former self dies
    at the same time the dungeon of darkness felt the transformation
    of my new manifestation and were taken by surprise

    instantaneously universal secrets are explained to me
    as if downloaded
    crazy energy courses through my mentality
    until its bloated
    feeling im bout to burst
    each millisecond gets worse
    i thought
    why had the Lord bestowed upon me this curse
    instead of first
    that was explained last
    then i looked down
    and saw my body sprawled out on the broken glass
    thank you Lord
    my soul is free at last
    i blast off the earth real fast
    to check out the scene
    and holla at the team
    i blaze a left at the furthest quasar
    with the speed of a mental laser
    cutting through tar
    after the indoctrination
    i jet back to the earth with amazing
    speed
    knowing now these knuckleheads will take heed
    and nourishment will furnish the seeds
    while wicked men bleed

    episode 3 coming next---------->
     
  2. Khasm13

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    this is my first attempt at an epic poem
    i hope that it comes out
    iller than the iliad...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    nice poet realllllllll nice Gifted Ghetto Superhero huh? headin to part 2 right NOW peace and blessins keep flowin
     
  4. Khasm13

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    thanks serenti
    for checking me out...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    This is nice. I hate I read episode 3 before episodes 1 and 2. I'm on to episode 2 next.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    dis beez the one that started it all
    but not really...
    thanks fam...i know everyone is not into what i'm into
    believe me...i used to it by now
    peace
    khasm
     
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    this was wonderful...i love it...good job...
     
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    thanks lovely...
    congrats on the spiritual union
    may it be a blessed one...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    THIS WAS A HELLAVA START! I'M OFF TO THE NEXT ONE
     
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