Black Poetry : "Gibby-Gibby"

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fire engine cake baked
    I'm five today...
    A big boy all grown-up
    I'm on my way...
    Daddy,
    Don't call me that!

    "Gibby-Gibby"...

    My name is Gibran, today
    That was yesterday...
    At 5 years old you know
    When I don't play...
    Nobody don't call me that!

    "Gibby-Gibby"...

    I'm mad ~
    Don't call me that
    I'm almost grown...
    The tooth under the pillow
    My girlfriend keeps at home
    Better not say it again!

    "Gibby-Gibby"...
    "Gibby-Gibby"...
    "Gibby-Gibby"...

    MOM!

    Happy Birthday Son,
    Daddy loves you- :heart:


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet piece and the way u broke it down
    yo pen alwayz have a story to tell...
     
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    GOOD OL' MISTER RICH

    Thank you, good brother!
     
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    i like this 1poetsought
    wonderful B-Day
    scribe for the
    littleone
    Peace
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so sweet, your style is so unique!

    Loved this piece,
    Angelic
     
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    Thats so cute!! :heart:
     
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    Gibran thanks you all (Went to church on his birthday).