Black Poetry : Giant Killer

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She thought he was something beautiful
    He was so attentive to her thoughts and feelings
    He was always there when the tears fell and to hold her hand
    When life seemed so unfair. As time went on he was the only person
    She could talk to he made himself always available could be paged or called when ever
    It seemed the world was falling apart. He was bigger than a big brother tall enough to slay
    Any giant. So it was no doubt she would feel so comfortable with him. That when he took her innocence
    She never thought of it as having something stolen. No she felt like she was given back to him in the
    Only way she knew how. But she was so wrong she never expected that one time to be the beginning of the most horrible time in her life. Taken from her early teen existence and thrown into a life full of adult problems and adult decisions. And the one person who had always been there to solve her problems turned away. There was no way the baby was his. He didn’t know what she expected him to do.
    So now she is left all alone with no one to slay her giants because her giant slayer became her giant. It’s a shame she had to learn that innocence was the most precious gift she had not one to give away so easily to anyone not even a giant killer.
     
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    whoaaaaaa!
    i like this flipside of ya pen nice write
     
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    love the flo lil sis keep up the good flo's.
     
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    Some lessons are learned too early in life, mainly when the very first one...is a GIANT one.
    nice piece poet...^5
     
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    Mmm. Thats' Tight Flow On!
     
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    :hearts3: :hearts3: Oh my my so much love thank you all.
    Yeah Queen its a shame this is the story of so many of our little princesses.
    $$R$$ Yeah I am baby stepping back into the game.
    Emisarry glad you liked it.
    Nevar thanks for all the positive feed back...
     
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