Black Poetry : Ghost in the Night

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amazing wonder,
    unknown to the world.
    but to me,
    you are very much alive.
    little orphan,
    of pain.
    but in my eyes,
    you feel no hurt--unlike me.
    torn apart heart,
    yet still beating.
    to me,
    you are the one of ones.
    cuz time has put you in front of me,
    and love has beckoned my eyes to open.
    and now i see you here,
    as i open my eyes.
    oh how beautiful you are,
    just--------everything.
    i can't explain,
    bcuz words are ants to you.
    you are mine,
    and mine only.
    join me in life,
    as well as in death.
    don't leave,
    stay a while.
    haunt me with your love,
    open the door of night.
    take a seat,
    and pick up where we left off.
    visit me in the land of the dying,
    bcuz that's what life is without you..... :grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i was all into this as u express what it's like without
    tyte scribe
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this write
    flow on
    this was a tight drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    this is so very touching. wow. nice flow too
     
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    this is tyte!!!!
     
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    This piece was just so poetically posed...really liked this.
     
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    Nicely written... :toast:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: to all of you who read my flow,
    all the love has come from the given love.
    and i'm letting ya'll know,
    that up above.
    it may have been God,
    that gave it.
    but bcuz of ya'll responding,
    ya'll made me and it........ :heart:
     
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    this was really touching...
    keep scribe'n like dis sis...word
    one love
    khasm
     
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