Black Poetry : Ghost in a Shell

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im a ghost in a shell
    frozen in hell
    cant move,
    Im broken and frail,Hopin' to tell
    My story,
    been known to make more than just sales
    its been blown,
    deep cover,
    was never focused on jail
    lifes ills,
    i had to overcome whut was dealt
    it was type real ,
    You dont know the pain that i felt
    imagine seeing everything you loved
    crumble before you
    stumble before you,
    Ah man,i , tears fall,
    love i adored you......
    i wish you were here,
    To mend my heart,
    save face
    save grace
    make plates
    of that good food you cooked......
    i remember how u looked
    in those shades
    mama mia!!!
    not only ya cuchi frita,
    made me full,
    but you're gorgoeus body senorita....was ,"wheeeeew!!!"
    you neva lost ya cool,
    i admired you for that...
    desired you for that,
    im tired of this crap....
    fulfill my soul once again,
    i beg you ,please...
    Im empty without you
    help me be at ease...
    for i will be thankful,
    grateful for you
    and the things that you do,
    cause i miss you.......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    missing that very so , this was deep and well felt LURK ...
     
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    en espanol..

    Lurk,
    Gocé realmente este pedazo. Agradable verle y yo veo lo mismo. Pero sentía este pedazo.


    En Englais:

    I really enjoyed this piece. Nice to see you and I see the same. But i feel this piece.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    as always it is nice to read you again...enjoyed this vibe

    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Missing that someone who made you feel whole, most have been in this place, and you expressed it well.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    lurk...love seeing another side of you...other rhythms.
    hadn't read you for awhile ... twas nice too.
     
  7. soulful2006

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    I feel you on this one no one likes to love go but when it does you can't begin to understand or imagine the pain and anguish you feel just because you wish to have that someone back. I couldn't have expressed it better nice flow.
     
  8. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thank you all for peepin this....and relating...i'll have some more stuff up soon ...peace yall
     
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    Lookin' forward to reading more from you as well I'm sure everyone else is.
     
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    peace,

    nice drop Lurk!!
     
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