Khasm13 : ghetto

Discussion in 'Khasm13' started by Khasm13, Mar 11, 2005.

  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2003
    Messages:
    10,784
    Likes Received:
    4,235
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +4,471
    da ghettooooooooooooooooooooooo...

    the land where smoke blows and catz got short bank rolls....
    nickle and dyme'n with no ooooooooooooooooooooo's
    some good and bad folks afros and cornrolls.....
    if you can't crack scold's...watch out for da lock and load...
    the streets can make the inhabitants old....
    ..........()
    before their time...intoxicating demons grabbing hold...
    while enticing addictives block out life's blinding shine...
    women and men mentalties always on 'on how ima gonna mine'
    cause the temperature is rising and my @ss is on the line....
    ..........()
    as i stood in line...3 neo-nazi's called me filthy and a baboon...lost in time
    because my gym shoes were dirty from flying like a birdie on da daily dusty grind
    stupid [email protected]..ya'll won't walk in da hood without pissin in ya pants...wetting your behind
    some po folks gotta resort to a life of crime...just to dine
    i'm....the product segregated systems and ghetto...of...the...mind...
    ..........()
    my feet walk with a sway because my ancestors feet were shackled back in da day
    from golden sands now i use my hands to fight roaches where i lay
    you can call me filthy cause in reality im a scapegoat...like timothy mcvey
    so bacdafucup...while i get this 40 and a blunt to go with this blazin flame hay....

    say....

    haven't you been told?
    ..........()
    my teeth shine with gold...
    ..........()
    from the land i was sold...
    ..........()
    cause...im...from...

    da ghetto
     
  2. Young Poet

    Young Poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 15, 2005
    Messages:
    47
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    god **** boy.. This poem goes hard.
     
  3. flo-real

    flo-real Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 2, 2004
    Messages:
    42
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Social Worker
    Location:
    I live in sacramento, CA
    Ratings:
    +4
    Challenge

    Hey sweetheart,

    good job I love your style it's mad dope so keep it up and don't alter it for no one.

    Now this is a challenge for you!! I want you to write Dookie Tooth Pt 2 and see if you can nail it! and it has to be better than part 1

    holla at me

    Flo-Real
     
  4. SEPIATEA

    SEPIATEA New Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 29, 2005
    Messages:
    4
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    nice vibe... luv your play on words
     
  5. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2003
    Messages:
    10,784
    Likes Received:
    4,235
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +4,471
    thanks fam for the love...i was stuck in da crib with my nephew friday night so i decided to write...good lookin...ya'll can get a lil mo harsh though...i know it's not perfect.......:)




    oh yeah?...that aint nuthin but a word...be back later

    one love
    khasm
     
Loading...