Black Poetry : Ghetto Sunshine.... Be Mines

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  1. Velvet Majesto

    Velvet Majesto Member MEMBER

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    This jus a lil quick poem.... not too deep but gets da job done




    Ghetto Sunshine, will u beam ur rays on me?
    Ghetto Sunshine, blind me wit ur beauty cause if I can't be with u then I don't wanna see
    Can u come up early n the morning and give me a kiss?
    Can u go down at night, be there in my heart?....... thats my only wish
    Sunshine... I'll shower u with with love and affection
    Can u let our love flower in every direction?
    Eclipse my heart with ur style and grace
    Eclipse my soul with ur warmth, the feelings u give me ill never be replaced
    Shine on my day when its gloomy and grey
    Shine on my mind so that I know everything ill be ok
    Brighten my life with ur sweet sense of humour
    Brighten my heart, gurl u grew on me like a tumor
    All is fair when the sun is out
    Ghetto Sunshine.... please bring ur rays my route.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a sweetly written piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin dis scribe flow on
    ya on target
     
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    wonderful just wonderful:)
    very lovely
    Peace
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  6. Velvet Majesto

    Velvet Majesto Member MEMBER

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    thank u all fo da love




    -Majesto
     
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