Black Poetry : Ghetto Soup. No ********.

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  1. dadachango69

    dadachango69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Excuse me", goes ghetto girl.

    "EXCUSE ME", yells ghetto girl.

    "There's a virus in my soup, wait-a.
    Take this s*** back and bring me another one."


    "Come back with another solution
    to my sexual revolution."

    A-B-C
    S-T-D
    H-I-V


    the alphabet soup of the new millenium

    sexual illusions
    prophylactic confusion
    better wear dat hat 'fore da rain come down
    blowing away your protection
    victimized by erections

    brothas and sistas
    black, brown, yellow and white
    poison milk is coming down
    much to that b**** medusa's delight

    turn your bone ta stone
    make your mom an' pop groan
    the weight of all this pain
    onset of
    the poison rain​

    "HIV is a scary little thing
    I'm so glad I've found the joy it brings."

    said the sweet, young beautiful project baby
    the one who never lived to be a lady

    no more brainless "thugs"
    stompin' around town in their "Lugz"
    no real direction
    yet, TONS of nasty infection​

    "hey, ma... what the deal ?!
    my d*** is brick.
    how YOU feel?
    you wanna s***?
    you wanna f***?"​


    this was the now-hardened seed of Abraham
    the one who really never gave a ****​

    "s*** my d***, you nasty b****,
    like you s*** his d***, you filthy trick..."

    "swallow 20,000 viruses
    so that all the medicines in the world can't stop your hurt
    infect you with my l-oooo-ve
    so you can spend the rest of your life looking for comfort"​


    passing the virus
    brotha to sista
    sista to brotha
    mother to daughter​

    "but, I don't wanna be careful
    I gotta live for the now
    n**** lo-ooooove a tight a**
    it's all they know how"

    but, "n*****" iz always ready
    ready to lick
    ready to d***
    stick out your tongue
    all coated in thrush
    brothaman's got the infection
    and spreads it to the rest of us

    street grime with a passion
    nothing but dirty-a** batz
    putting da love on da kitty kat
    of that, "****, she FAT!!"
    mentally-unstable chickenhead
    with the cancelled WIC check

    and now her time has come
    to give birth like "Stran-JHAY"
    the dawning of her misery
    into the clear light of her day

    a child
    born to die
    to reflect on life
    without even a try

    "Mooo-mmy why you cryin'?"
    "Mooo-mmy why you dyin'?"

    is that nasty little cell killing your protection?
    is it time for you’re a** to get that next injection?


    A-B-C
    S-T-D
    H-I-V



    the alphabet soup of the new millenium
    but, "n*****" ain't learning
    "n*****" iz thug
    they all up in your a** and ain't really trying to hug
    "D" & "T"... and that shorty "E"
    all wanna train you to be a
    sl-aaaa-ve to their rhythms
    get you high... get it in you...

    f*** her hard, stereotype thugn****.
    f*** her deep, stereotype spicn****.

    forget about the times when the slaveowner
    had you f*** your mother
    to reproduce like cattle
    3/5ths the man you once were
    voluntary slavery
    that's the REAL battle.​

    "by the way, thugn****..."
    "check it out, spicn****..."

    "before, you get up an' go..."

    "What's your name, baby?
    cause I really truly wanna be your H**."


    copyright 2002 Hiali Quiñonez & SoulChango Productions
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wooohhhhh ... elementary facts..you are so clear .......very deep Warrior exposing the deadly virus in the flow..the message is there in the alphabet soup ..so all will know..wear that rain coat
    Peace
    Blue
     
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    Nice rhythym
    Tight flow
    Excellent expressions
    Rhymes for these Tymes
    Peace and Blessings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! tyte slow down on the banned wordz
    and the use of the N words we just don't use
    that here ..........Peace
     
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    Loved the message in this, and how you posed and placed those words.
     
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    Be careful, the Ghetto soup is hot & steamin', U'll burn your tongue.

    Bring it, bruh, cuz it's tight.
     
  7. dadachango69

    dadachango69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love. If only one person gets the message, then maybe then one life can be saved.

    (Rich, these are old poems... there's a reason for their being there. I deleted them myself. My audience understands wassup. I am creative about my use of them, I don't necessarily agree with them in my philosophy)
     
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    love the way you came with this truth, dada. straight up dope
     
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    :jawdrop: All I can say is WHOA! I got your message loud and clear. And I loved the way you brought it. Much love to you.
     
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    dadachango69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol... thanks for the support, gempis and true... it ain't about the messeger, but more about THE MESSAGE... much health to everyone here....

    :)
     
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