Black Poetry : ghetto predators (ugly beauty)

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flesh being stripped from bones
    back alleys of the Ghetto
    predatory pimp dehumanizes pitiful prostitute
    who participates willingly
    in predatory games. being pimped.
    for she has lost her pride
    to the black piranha of the cesspool
    in her pungent plight,
    Pape’ who played here,
    Papa, who at 8 laid her,
    and her Pimp who now portrays her
    as his girl when all the while plaguing piranha
    gnaw at her person-hood
    so that all that remains
    is the remains of what was beautiful.
    Pimp pushes sister prostitute in the Ghetto.

    Dealer deals diamonds in the rough
    to a diamond cut game
    See the diamonds shine
    See the diamonds shine
    black jewels born of black loins
    dealing in cracked lives
    cracked souls
    in cracked out holes
    as cracked heads gather
    to crack filled pipes
    not noticing the cracked out remains
    of Corey, little Corey,
    only twelve, little Corey
    killed by the crack
    dealt by 10 year old diamonds in the rough
    in a rough and tough game
    of economic socialism in the Ghetto.

    cool cats in colored craziness
    kill future clans
    of a fellow black man
    when for Ghetto lands
    cool cats grab the sands
    the sands of time in hand
    and bring black to and end
    in time as in time
    the clock tics with
    cool cats doing ticks and tocks
    to penitentiary clocks
    sleeping in white socks
    as time, tick tocks
    tick tocks, tick tocks
    and cool cat forgot
    by colored cats
    who swore by blood
    one for all and all for one
    and cool cat sits
    tick tock, tick tock
    and Ghetto keeps passing time.
    tick tock.

    Daddy leaves the baby
    Momma, alley’s home
    Diamonds deal
    Starvation steals
    Bad cops kill
    as hydrants spill
    predators prepare for another meal
    and the sun sets once again
    on the Ghetto.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    i was caught up
    in it as a story
    being told
    enjoyed this on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MZ!

    how can i really say thanks. hang with me - i plan on atleast one post per day. so we can stay freshhhh!!!!!
     
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    man what a classic here
    lovin ya flowz
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the support my brutha.
     
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    good lawrd
    this is tight
    peace my brother poet
    Peace
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep and to the point....feeling this whole heartedly
     
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    Sista Blue- Sista Blue. Thansk for reading me.
     
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    this is tyte son....i can see this

    and her Pimp who now portrays her
    as his girl when all the while plaguing piranha
    gnaw at her person-hood


    one love
    khasm
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    foxi and khas! thanks for the read. i appreciate your knods!
     
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