Black Poetry : Ghetto Mama Blues

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  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :argue: Because i'm from the ghetto
    and have 3 kid
    by 3 different men
    i gotta be in the category
    of a hoo
    that i must be known around town
    and those men who "hit that" are heros
    people kissing their ***
    talkin bout they hith that **** right
    why i gotta be consider a hoo?
    i wasn't the one who did it alone
    but i'm the one raising my kids on my own
    no welfare
    no secion 8
    and **** sure no support from my famliy
    I got two jobs
    go to school
    and still take care of my 3 babies wit no support
    but because i live in the ghetto
    andis in the category of hoo
    people don't see me as that
    men see me for sex
    talkin bout i luv u
    and i'll take care of your 3 kids
    but then they run faster than crackhead
    looking for crack
    but why i got be consider a hoo
    why can't i be an excellent mother
    or a hard worker
    ohh because of my past background
    I'm still the same
    and sex is still just a game
    well i motha now and i don't care
    and i know i'm not a hoo
    I work to hard to be called to be one
    what a really deserve is a round of applause
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and let me be the first to both agree... :wink: and give it to you :toast: I will go futher...the fact that you are responsible and going the whole nine yards to take care of what you brought into the world...I will gladly :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: to you...

    hello...and welcome
     
  3. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to da fam
    nice 2nd posts
    live from the streets
    ya know
    i feel u on dat
    what's really good
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First of all, this was so deep, and I loved how you wrote this. I think many see this situation as 3 mistakes. But, often what is not seen is what it takes to turn a life around for the better, and you highlighted this very well.
     
  5. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank -you for the love I realy apricate it I really hope u enjoyed it came straight from da heart
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sis, this heartfelt
    i was walkin my road just the other day
    thinkin of folks in "my" world that i admire
    your perseverence n love despite
    hardships keeps you as one of my inspirations

    OneLove,
    /antar
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off da hook here flow on !!!
     
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