Black Poetry : Ghetto Credo

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  1. lilcutie

    lilcutie Active Member MEMBER

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    F-ck the world and everyone in it
    Hold your won
    Don't worry about the rest of them
    Keep your gun in front of you
    And your people beside you
    Never keep ANYONE behind you
    Or you'll get stabbed in the back

    Keep your enemies close
    And your friends closer
    No matter what anyone says
    they aint got your back
    Trust no one
    But let everyone trust you
    Pick your hustles well
    And learn it in and out
    THen learn it some more
    Stay on top of your game
    And NEVER let anyone know everything

    It's okay to flaunt your wealth
    But not too much
    Keep yourself well-guarded
    And be able to protect yourself
    Use your mind and your muscle
    And NEVER TRUST ANYONE

    THen you'll be fine
    But pray to God that it stays that way
    Because one day
    There will be someone
    Who knows these words better than you
    And you WILL be distroyed
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah str8 ghetto ......betrayal can be a real u know !
    i here ya
     
  3. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ur an angry poet, but i feel the pain....i can b like that sometime...good drop...very emotional
     
  4. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked it. Very expressive and emotional. The ending is so true and I liked the way u did that. Nice.
    :slobber:
    Holla
    www.poetrypoem.com/iwannabe
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like the lesson, so true :flamet:
     
  7. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Straight Starfire!!!
    Yep Betrayal is a "B."
    But don't ever let it hold you back. Keep on doing the **** thing.
     
  8. ladyafrika

    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, true story
    thats how things work in the ghetto
    you either shoot or be shot!!!!!
     
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