Black Poetry : Getting Off

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Getting Off

    My lyrics twirl like a spirit world some ghosts in my scripts
    As I post and flip verses like pancakes at IHOPP get a grip
    Going to Texas and plan to gamble in the Panhadle and be
    A Gorilla from Amirillo not a ding dong but a King Kong G
    Plus my voice able to sing in horse stables and physically rope
    A goat around the throat and have a rodeo show I hope
    Never been a clown on the block work around the clock
    Bring HIPHOP but slip a lot in verses many times stopped
    On a dime, not a crazy quitter dang sure ain’t a babysitter
    Give me a wild stare yall need childcare so beware a hitter
    Of a file ball, style all screwed up I’ve stewed butt with ill
    Lyrics, fill with hate have the ill trait of lacking control
    Plus actiong bold like you have common sense this old
    Boy couldn’t have it if he grab it off the shelf you cold
    Rhymes soft with no deft, you live corrupt should give
    Up with the intent of never returning to HIPHOP your crib
    Is a straw house and your flaws arouse folks brains because
    All your quotes are lame like your breath stink son so pause
    On your actions, MC’S says you blind and wimpy I’ll leave your
    mind empty better go find a Blimpie sandwich I’m hardcore
    DA BIGGEST you been dumb and the income arising from
    B-BOYS don’t pay rent, hey it dents your billfold you a bum
     
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    What a dope opening line. This piece made me laugh a couple of times too. Although I thought beginning and middle were stronger than the end, I still found it very entertaining.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off da chain this was da bomb !!!!
     
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    thanks for the props on this one rich and moham
     
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