Black Poetry : Getting BY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Jan 24, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not really understand much
    feeling vibes thats not correct
    as i try to feed in my mind
    what is going on at time

    things are just not the same
    picture clear very plain
    as i feel and absorb what sups
    feeling like i am cut short

    want to ask question
    not knowing where to start
    as i do give careful thoughts
    of what i observe and what see
    not wanting to repeat histroy

    yet i guess that is how it is
    Well is dry ..i have no more tears
    life cannot always be a big thrill

    sure there are some time to play
    yet i feel those days are like a maze
    where i get caught trying to find my way
    trying to make it through the day
    as i sit and wonder why
    cause all i'm doing
    is getting by
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight it flowed like water for real keep repping like this
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you MADDRAPPER....for blessing my scribe...this really do mean alot to me..thank you...i will do just that...thank you for the love :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed Blueeeeeeeee
    sometime i wonder dis was awesome tyte
    and real
     
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    Yes, some days we do feel stuck in the middle, asking self what is all this for? The answers will come, although the waiting isn't easy. Feeling this, emotively written piece.
     
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    Wow, Blue, this piece really really resonates with me right now. I am feelin every line, and I feel like I should thank you for writing this. Peace and much love, sister.
     
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    Getting by...
    leads to a "successful" journey
    because when you get by...you also overcome...
    just my thoughts...while feeling your flow.
    As always Sister Bluewater
    Much love and respect
     
  8. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you brother Rich it do at times has one thinking:heart:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know that is so true my sister...thank you for feeling me on this :heart:
     
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    smiling my sweet and kind sister...thank you so much...the connection of thoughts flows :heart:much love to you :)
     
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