Black Poetry : Getting Better

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, May 14, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Getting Better

    My Blend rattle men and cattle they stand afraid of my
    Man made rhymes, twist situations and wish nations try
    Bow down I somehow clown those that battle me they cry
    Afterwards, deal with hardcore criminals in more general
    My blend is art but in the dark have to depend on touch
    Got friends in search of flash lights when I do fast writes clutch
    An ink pen and think then too many stink men wanna battle me
    Deal with smell and hearing hell I’m fearing surpised as **** to be
    On top and somebody else rise up to take my spot its clear
    I must remain the best and tame the rest and make them sincere
    Kneel to my rhyme that make me feel divine this revals the sign
    Of the times, like coffee I’m brewing somehow and doing it now wine
    On the table enables me to drink the blood of HIP HOP my quotes bloom
    To folks in a room, like a dictionary several words on levels heard tunes
    The brains, my boss abilty brings hostility like Billy The kid I make
    Cats famous like Emilio Estevez I’m William Bonney the fast great
    Never a retard my yard so hard had to build a fence and fill the dense
    Land with crops got plans hot to raise wheat to eat I’m convinced
    With Miracle Gro and my lyrical flow I can make this happen rather fast
    My rhymes forever funky and clever like Humpty Dumpty but his ***
    Fell of a wall and never lived to tell all about his fresh eggs so I best
    Pledege and follow through and swallow the true meanings of stress
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    AND U PUT HIPHOP IN CAPS TOO...

    i'm the dope in the pipe
    that confused ya mind
    and made u think these wack lines shine
    this a citizens arrest
    of the lyrically unblessed
    cause when u write rhymes it's a crime
    so don't drop the soap
    and give up the hope
    that anyone likes this crap
    i mean u gotta be on smack
    this is nick nack patty wack
    never mind hiphop
    this don't even qualify as "rap"
    ur skills is an arrested under development
    u here is like the pilgrim settlement
    so sail off on the santa maria
    for real u rhyme bad
    and that's really sad
    so c-ya i wouldn't wanna b-ya
    I c ur thread
    scream out code red
    but it's a false alarm
    cause ova here ain't no fiya
    u need some miricle grow
    and i'm glad that u know
    cause ur skills leave nuttin to be desired
    and just so u know the lady is first
    and u should change the title to gettin worse
     
  3. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GIRL YOU ON SOME CRAZY HYPE ARE YOU A LADY OR DIKE YOUR GRAVY AIN'T RIGHT CANDIES PINK AND YOUR PANTIES STINK YOU BABBLE JUNK i'LL UNRAVEL YOUR JUNK MY DOME PERFECT WHILE YOU LIKE A TELPHONE CIRCUIT MANY CALLS AND PLENTY FALLS DO YOU HAVE ANY BALLS? OH i FORGOT YOU A GIRL, LOOK YOU CAN'T WIN THIS RHYME i'LL RIP THE END OF YOUR SPINE MY LYRICS RAZOR SHARP i'LL BE A MAJOR PART OF YOUR DOWN FALL I COULD CLOWN ALL YOUR LYRICS, SO GIRL STAY IN YOUR DISMENSION AND PAY ATTENTION NOT TO MENTION RESPECT ME OR GET WRECKED G GIRL i'M A PHANTOM OF CORRUPTION WITH A RANDON PRODUCTION OF A GROOVY MOVIE SO DON'T BOO ME BECAUSE I'M ILL YOU GOT FLAWS SO CHILL YOU COULDN'T BUILD A DOG HOUSE WITH THEM SICK BRICKS YOU GOT STRAIGHT UP WHACK
     
  4. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Better

    I

    Teach

    Cultural

    HIPHOP

    An acronym for b****
    But I bet when u walk f**-boy
    ur a** has a switch
    Super dud
    Just a scrub
    That never get's play
    same ole play'd out style
    day after day
    trivial ramblings
    that don't make any sense
    if this was a rap style
    i'd label it dense
    empty
    like ur pockets
    cause i can c ur broke as a joke
    like the economy
    u ain't harmin me
    ur like the folk that need hope
    fake pimp
    just a wimp
    without any riches
    how u gon be a pimp
    ur just one of the bi****s
    callin out HIPHOP
    thinkin u smart
    when ur rear end
    is p***y
    for co** after dark
    if i was a dyke
    i'd proly like u
    cause u act like a girl
    c how i'm runnin this train write on you
    so boo effin hoo
    fake rapper do what u do
    cry me a river
    and i'll swim right on thru
    and so u know
    u my ho
    so hit the steets my fresh meat
    and wear the blonde wig
    i'll b the crack deala
    and u can be one of my kids
    i'll flip u so quick
    as if u were a tres 1
    come back when u done
    sellin that one
     
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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA......

    one love
    khasm
     
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    i'M COMPLETE PROGRESS YOU JUST A FREAK IN A DRESS THAT LEAK THAT MESS ON KOTEX SAY WHAT i'MPRESSED YOU WANT MORE SEX THIS WHORE IS COMPLEX CAN'T STOP ******* STOP DUCKING MY ****, YOUR WHACK BUTT CAN'T BACK UP YOUR THEORY WITH FACTS LIKE HEIDI SPLICE YOU LEERIE ACT SO CLOSE YOUR LEGS, YOU WHACK CLOWN IT BEST YOU BACK DOWN BEFORE YOU GET SMACKED AROUND i'M YOUR PIMP YOU A HARDCORE WIMP PULL YOUR PANTIES UP GIRL, i PAY BACK FAT LOANS WHILE YOU A CRACK HEAD AT HOME I ATTACKS ZONES WITH INFRARED YOU KNOW NO FACTS JUST AN EMPTY HEAD, LOOK I CAN REVERSE DIRECTIONS WHILE YOUR BUTT THIRST FOR AFFECTION NOW I GOT THE WORSE ERECTION GIVE IT HERE BOO i'LL USE PROTECTION, YOUR HEART DESIRE IS TO START A FIRE IN MY PANTS BUT ITS GONNA REQUIRE SOME ROMANCE AND YOU JUST A PHONY FEMALE WEARING A PONY TAIL NOW GET OUT MY THREADS
     
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    Da Street Rebel Banned MEMBER

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    gettin' worse

    yo bad she comin' at you hard
    just typin in caps man is not getting it

    you have hit harder you she ain't playin
    this is all you got bad ALL these years of writing:?:

    :help:

    i'm bringin' water and a towel to your corner man

    get ready for round 4

    she's already winning 2 rounds to 1

    and come out swingin'
     
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    man...that getting worse title dern near made me spit out my coffee at the gig....lol
    yeah bad...she's workin u...if i were u i'd bring the A+ game...

    one love
    khasm
     
  9. MRS. LADY

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    a pimp smacks a chick
    cause she owe him sum doe
    not because he ain't a man
    and a lady told him so
    so there's the door
    fake pimp
    gotta go
    gotta go
    cause u the b*****
    2night
    so get on the hoe stroe
    u got no bullets in ya burna
    but hit the block
    and screamin murda
    been around 4 years
    but still
    the madd rapper
    that no body ever heard of
    weather i wear a dress
    or i'm rockin my nike's
    my rhymes could be a negative two
    but i'd still be twice as nice
    readin ur wack flows
    i be like
    what the eff did he just say
    i wish sumbody put a muzzle on
    and take ur mic away
    ooops i'm sorry u ain't worthy of a mic
    imma one man kinda lady
    and my flow is crazy hype
    i'm strictly di**ly
    and ur sickly
    i don't lickety no c**t
    and ur rhymes are like morning breath
    cause what u spit is shi*
    if ur raps were new jersey drive
    i would be the car jacker
    my rhymes are an explosion of verse
    and urs are merely fire ********
    with no boom to bat but u get the boot
    and imma playa playa that's sure to take ur loot
     
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    WoW she said CHANGE THE TITLE TO GETTIN WORSE LOL

    :qqb020:

    :read:

    Ummmmm so Im not a poet or a rapper or a HIP HOP expert

    but I do consider myself well read :read:

    Rhymebad keeps attacking Sister Miss Lady as a lady

    All of Sister Miss Lady's lyrics are about his lyrics his lines his rhymes

    All it seems is being said on his part is negative ish about her bein a "chic"

    But lyrically... Sister shuttin' it down :read:

    As far as wit, quickness of reply, rhythm, focus... Miss Lady has it by a mile

    IF this was a battle... it was over after Miss Lady's second verse.

    :read:

    I do love a good action filled piece :read:

    sittin down with my popcorn to see what happens next :look:
     
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