Black Short Stories : Gettin' It Up (Part 2: Tryin' Again)

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  1. freedomspeaks

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    Dre and I broke up directly after that. I didn't want a man who couldn't please me like real man and he said he didn't want a woman would couldn't recognize a real man in front of her. We stopped talking and everything. We would mean mugged each other in the streetz and we spread rumours behind the other person's back so no one would get the other person. Well, I started the rumour thing but he retaliated. It even got to the point were our own friends got tired of hearing about it. We would try to tell them something about the other person and no one would listen. They would ignore us like some wansters yo. I wasn't up for that junk though. If they weren't gon' listen I might as well find some other friends then and that is just what I did. I became a Capital Holmes Chick. They were the down south rebel girls. We started all the drama in the school and kept it heated. We never left one person standing if we got to fighting. It was all for one and one for all when we battled. We kept it real.

    Repin' South Ward was cool for me. I had changed some but I still was down for the BKKK. Things with Dre ad gotten worst though. I would walk down the halls and see Dre with all kinds of girls. When he saw that it was me he would say something it their ears to make them blush or laugh. It got to me after a while and I got back at him. I started hanging with this rebel ***** named Smoky. They called him that because he loved smokin' blunt 50's. He was the star of the basketball team and everything. He didn't go to school half the time but he always made it to practice. He was the type that thought by him being a star basketball player he was destined for the NBA like Kobe Bryant or sumthin'. I got tired of hearing that stupid stuff about basketball. That was the only thing he talked about. With Dre it was never like that. He talked to me on ever subject that came up. I didn't like Smoky but I lead everyone else to believe that I did. My friends were even believing I did. The girls were hatin' cause I had what they didn't, popularity.

    Oh, if they only knew it wasn't all it was pumped up to be.

    Dre had gotten word of my relationship with Smoky around the way through my old homies I used to kick it with when I was down for BKKK. He got heated with me and came down hard on me. We had another big fallin' out and I thought things were never gon' be the same. He even crammed down on Smoky and his crew with a mac10. I was the center attraction in the school now. People hated on me because I was the one who cause Smoky to have a broke leg. Dre had broke it in retaliation of my relationship with him.

    One day I decided to confront him. He had another girl under his wings as usual. I pushed my way over into the mix and Meeka looked me up and down like she was ready to fight. I looked her back the same way letting her know I was down for whateva. Meeka was dating Dre now. She was a sucker. She knew I was first in his heart and plus she knew she couldn't **** with a Capital Holmes Chick in the first place.

    Dre stepped in. "Ay yo, ya'll need to cool this. Ya'll know ya'll ain't finna do nothin'. I don't know why ya'll in each others face like that."

    "Whateva Dre, bust a nut and get off my cl!t." I said.

    "Ohhhhh, so now you want me to do it." Dre said sarcastically.

    "See, that's the main reason we ain't together. I hate you."

    "Hey Meeka, let me catch up with you. This ain't gon' take up but a second." He assured her.

    She looked me up and down one more and kicked to the south. I wanted to ring her neck but I didn't. I just mean mugged her @ss until she was out of my sight.

    "Aiight, what chu want?"

    "I don't know you tell me. You the one with all the games."

    "Awwww, here we go. Games? You know all the tricks of that trade yo."

    "Whateva, we got to talk. Come over to my place tonight. We gon' talk about this. You know I shouldn't be talkin' to you now. These hater will go straight to Smoky and get me eat all up. Five, be there."

    "Aiight, I got cha."

    I turned to walk away. He pulled my arm. "Ay."

    "What?" I looked back at him.

    "Wear something sexy for me." He looked at me seductively.

    "What for, you ain't gon' know how to get it up." I laughed and walked away.


    Walking home from school was a drag for me. I didn't know why I told him to meet me here anyway. I had gave a note to Lamisha to give to him telling him to come in through the back. I didn't want everybody to know I was talking to him privately. To be honest, I don't even know why I'm talking to him. He wasn't going to take me seriously anyway. He never did. I hated him.

    Around six thirty I heard a knock on the door. I was mad at him because he was late as usual. He was such a jokester.

    I opened the door. "Where have you been? You are always late."

    "Hey, I'm here ain't I?"

    "Yeah, whateva. You know why I called you here anyway. What's up? Why you trippin' on Smoky."

    "Trippin' on Smoky? Why you trippin' on Meeka?"

    "Aw, don't you put this on me. I wasn't the one who broke someone's leg."

    "Oh, but you would ahve had I not been standing right there in front of you."

    And, so? I thought to myself.

    "Look, how you gon' tell me?"

    "Whateva, you are full of jokes."

    "Joke, man whateva. Just keep yo hands to yo self." I sighed and put my hands to my hand.

    "Only if your ***** does the same."

    "Aiight, troose."

    "Troose."

    I thought the whole thing was over with but before I could even lead him to the door he looked me deep in my eyes and kissed me. It caught me by surprise. I didn't know what to do. It was crazy. He was crazy if he thought I still loved him. Well, okay he wasn't crazy about that one but I couldn't do this. I just couldn't. Then why wasn't I stopping him? I'ono.

    Instead, I deepened the kiss and put my hands around his head. I was ready to finish what we started a year ago with a man I really loved and from the looks of things so was he. He wasn't giving me enough room if I wanted to stop him anyway.

    He kissed me from my lips and around my neck. Oh, God I can't believe we're doing this. He lifted me into the air and lead me to my room. It was six thirty and my sisters were over their cousin's house. They were due home in an hour. Once we were in my room he gently laid me on the bed. I was motionless under his touch. It was just like last time except this time there was no Frebreze, no roses, no lingerie, and no fruit. It was just me and him.

    He slowly unbuttoned my blose. I moaned into the air. The thoughts of stopping had long ago subside.When the blose was completely unbuttoned he threw it on the floor. It took no time with my bra. He just unsnapped the front clasp and opened it. He sucked on me nice and slowly. It was like a sweet melody. Before long I was completely wet in my pants and on my chest.

    Wanting no more sucking he lead his journey to my pants. He pulled them off. Once they were gone he ripped my panties clean off. There was pain but it felt all so good. He got on his knees and started to lick me.

    I stopped him. "No, maybe we should wait until later for that. Let's go str8 to the lovin'."

    I wouldn't make that mistake again. I was going to use it while it was up and ready. I didn't want to be disappointed like last time.

    "Okay."

    He got up. He gently got on top of me. I laid there. I was waiting. It was then that he came.

    What? Ohhhh he11111 naw.

    He came before he could even get in me. Is this a curse or sumthin'? I can't believe this **** is happening to me. I mean, happening to us.

    He shook uncontrollably for about two mintues. After he was done he just fell out on top of me.

    Yeah great, now I can't even get up.

    When he had finally gotten enough strength to get up I just looked at him. I didn't know what to do. I was just digusted. All this time we had been tryin' to get our swurve on and it was not even poppin'.

    He laid on the other side of the bed. I laid their in the same spot just lookin' up at the ceiling.

    "Baby, you okay?" He said looking over at me.

    I wasn't giving him the time of the day. I was still looking up at the ceiling. "You know what Dre, I think it's best you should leave. I don't want you anymore. I don't think it's good for us to even try. You gon' and stay with Meeka. Maybe, you can please her."

    "What? Are you sure? I mean, cause we can try this again."

    "No, we can't. This ain't no third times a charm ****. I don't want you anymore. Get out!"

    I started yelling at him. I pushed him out the room all the way out the door. He was not the man I thought he was. I didn't need him. After this we stopped our antics about the other person. We stopped the rumours, the lies, and the fights and stares. We lost all contact except the occasional seeing each other in the halls.

    I ended up giving my virginity up to Smoky. Smoky wasn't all that great in conversation but he was an awesome lover. He satisfied my every need. I couldn't have asked for more. I didn't end up staying with him because I didn't like everything else about him but I do booty calls in the middle of the night with him every once and a while though. Can I get a woo-woo?

    Dre ended up poppin' Meeka's cherry but she left him shortly afterwards because she couldn't get it up either. I heard that he snooped around her ***** also and she gave him another try only to have the same thing happen again. They broke up for good after the third try. I think something is wrong with Dre. Maybe, it's a decease or sumthin' I don't know. But whateva it is, he still can't keep a girl.

    Me, well let's just say I have no problem with gettin' other guys up. At first I thought it was something I was doing but it wasn't. I can just take off my top and a man will get hard for me. It wasn't me. And I hope my next real boyfriend won't be like that either. If he is then........

    DDDDAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    The End.
     
  2. freedomspeaks

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    Oh yeah, and freedomspeaks is me also.
     
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    xpression expression !!!!
    what a story told here,i hear ya
     
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    Thanks Rich. I tried not to tell all. A lady neva tells all. lol But I hope ya'll got the point. Thanks Rich, for feelin' this piece. :wink:
     
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    u know i'm feelin this, this was a trip, maybe Dre need some Niagra(ghetto viagra....
    :heart:
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    Story you need a whoopin for that one:lol:and you read too much Zane:lol:
    Foxi I love this sis foreal wassup wit dude:lol:
     
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    glad i found pt.2. tyte story. sometimes certain things arent meant to be. looks like this was one of those times. again tyte story.
     
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