Black Poetry : Gets No Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sweet baby_face, Nov 13, 2009.

  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U've been faking the realness with me for so long
    Almost had me believing that u were the truth
    Well the smoke and mirrors are gone now
    And I see what u really do
    I don't want an explanation
    U don't deserve an encore
    I'm moving on the next phase of my life
    And u need to stay on the other side of the door
    U've been lying to others
    But u ain't gonna lie to me
    Trying to make me out to be the prime suspect
    While u play victim and police
    B__ Please
    I know how u get down
    U'se real phony
    So, I'm a gonna say this one time
    And one time only
    I'm through with yr sorry a**
    And u gets no love from me...
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Well, woo-sah, Sister, WOO-SAH! (lol) j/k

    But, You sho nuff spoke your mind and made it REAL PLAIN!

    When I read this, I thought of the song, "I Will Survive!"


    Good venting piece!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa no love at all for da one who slips
     
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    hmmmm....

    THANKS for sharing.
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's about u
     
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    you spoke your mind on this ....nice one
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister Sweet baby_face
    We as humans have in the past/are as of today/and will in the future fall short of "Perfection". Yet, we forgive and move on! However, outbursts as this is not allowed in the poetry forums. No one's above the rules as you should well know. This has been handled and passed, please refrain from addressing a poet in a dis-respectful manner!
    Please let this serve as a warning!
    Much luv and respect
    Queentswana
     
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