Black Poetry : GET YOUR **** KIDS! (the Bernie Mac Daycare Service.)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by theDynasty1979, Jul 15, 2003.

  1. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mm. mm. mm.
    while you was sittin in the house gettin drunk off thunderbird
    your son was at the park learnin to speak bad words.
    i stood in the door and watched his little ***
    tryna beat up the smaller kids and peein in the grass.
    running in front of cars and stealin other kids toys
    and you wonder why dont nobody wanna babysit the boy.

    while you was all up in some ****** face tryna make him play dad
    your daughter was at the corner store, showin off her little ***.
    don't look at me crazy, i know she only eight
    but she all up in grownfolks shytt, askin my nephew for a date.
    outside coochie poppin left and right and hunchin the little boys
    got ken and barbie buckitt nekkid;thats what she do with her toys

    why you workin a double shift? don't get me wrong, a job is good
    but you don't have no childcare; so they wander all day around the hood.
    they get off the bus from school hungry as hell and you aint home to feed them
    then you wanna beat the caseworker up cause child welfare say you mistreat them.
    you killin yourself workin 8 to 8 to buy a ten year old the new Jordans
    when what they really need is for you to be there and support them.

    wanna get fly with somebody elses mother cause your kids done somethin wrong
    you cant raise your kids halway right cause you drunk, you whorin, or you gone.
    they outside singin "my neck, my back" or they practicing the Harlem shake
    i asked lil Chris to spell his name, the lil ***** started off with a K.
    i asked lil NayNay to tell me, what was four plus one?
    you wanna know what your daughter told me?
    "i dont know, but guess where babies come from."

    when they dumb as hell and failin classes
    and childrens service come take they *****
    when they start jumpin flyy on yes, you, too
    when you on Maury Povich hollerin, "what do i do??"
    when Boo'Boo in jail for life and he only nineteen
    when you buyin a Happy Mothers Day card on her sweet sixteen
    when you in a nuthouse and your hair fallin out
    remember i told you to come get you bad *** kids and straighten them out.
    if you worried about abuse charges, then send'em to us.
    the Bernie Mac School.
    WE'LL FUGG THEY BAD ***** UP!!
    --peace.Ms.Dy

    *no really: it's some bad *** kids runnin the streets. take care of home, yall, cause someday, them same kids you ignorin and cussin and fussin at gone be the ones responsible for takin care of you. Remember That.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good writing! Comedy ain't no joke...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey theDynasty1979 ...
    this is a together flow
    telling it all
    you gotta watch your kids
    Peace
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truthful and tyte flow...
     
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    LOVING THIS HERE! our children hold the key to our future!
    We need to steer them right! Tyte piece!
     
  6. Earl

    Earl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this. I think you should tighten it up a littl and it will be registering off the charts. I totally feel you on this. I woork with some of those bad a kids your talking about. Them and their parents need help.
     
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