Black Poetry : Get Wit it

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Feb 2, 2012.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Get Wit it



    My art brisk and have a sharp twist like a curve ball and

    This serve all with knowledge from college with a plan

    Innovative and creative with significant things on my sleeves

    Different bling and on microphones many inferior spills MC’S

    Must have superior skills keep my car interior filled with CD’S

    Soften my words as their often served on bread even birds fled

    When this stuff flocked together stay hot forever to the misled

    As for me my art act is like a heart attack cats can’t breathe

    Learned that from Fabulous, and some fall to their knees

    Need help still proceed except for an occasional rap song

    Feel trapped along the edges of life on ledges of strife wrong

    In my presence, but feel good as I ever did always been

    A clever kid and never slid into crime, that’s a no win

    Situation, lame time remains for crimes of the brain no end

    Headache, confirmed my plot is clog can learn a lot from

    A dog like how to bark in the park at dark then goes dumb

    And chew a bone after my crew is gone then prowl to get

    Sex piss on trees and howl when it’s complex become a threat

    To Tom Cats, drink rum and wine but sometime drinking make

    Fools of folks so I’m here to school with quotes but in a lake

    Of fakes need tools and a boat, cool enough to float on all this hate



     
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    twistses my brain, up in the Seven Eleven amazing like the Normady

    invasion ready for a slurpee like Eddie Murphy end up in Beverly Hills

    doing cop work trying to stop jerks keep my brain and cleverly build

    no crown for the wrath love cums around my path take a renown bath

    and become a power thug in a shower of suds boo can do the math

    “look boo we here at the Seven Eleven got a hot plot that’s demanding

    But it’s not outstanding but it’s acceptable and incredible planning

    For a date, need you seated with your arms crossed because your

    Sexual storm is boss, your body raise some concern emotions soar
     
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    Sexual storm is boss, your body raise some concern emotions soar

    Must come to terms on us dating, my eyes measure your hips as

    The pleasure flips like pancakes at IHOPP like Lou Rawls I grip Jazz

    Girl your body is sweet butters and I’m ready to compete with others

    So boo you’re a cool dame like a coach got rules in your game that butters

    My brain ready to make it rain like Fat Joe I let my stats flow need pride

    And trust like a housekeeper can’t abide dust, lets ride on the bus and stride

    In tune for a date, girl you on my menu like ribs so I continue to live just

    To rap to you boo I spent seasons trying to present resons why I must

    Have a flower garden and the power is starting to possess me it’s time

    To pluck a rose while my luck grows for sex lets go wine and dine?

    Girl you stays a queen but there are ways and means to try find

    Sex behavior great and I’m in favor of a date you got flavor in your

    Cake ready and proper like Betty Crocker and that’s a shocker pour

    The sugar”, “ naw player you wanna suck and put my breasts through
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwww!!!
    i can see all this clear
     
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    MsVeraisblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, you had alot to say.. :wave: I was flowing with cha til i got to the Betty Crocker part and then i realize i was hungary and needed to eat. Its real good tho.
     
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    THANKS FOR THE PROPKS NA CRITIQUE FROM RICH AND LADY V GIVING YALL MORE


    Girl boo” “naw player the main part is to tame my heart I’m a dame that

    Spark beauty in the dark your duty is to slide inside the the awaiting phat

    Lips of my thing and rip the bedsprings and possibly break the headboard

    You have true pipe but you too hype stop for goodness sake your red Ford

    Won’t do, I’m wet and get all sorts of praise hard to use a short phrase to

    Describe the live cream pies that are between my thighs amaze quiet a few

    Boys, so they talk jive be yelling and stuff, in my room perfume and lace

    In there the bed’s a place where sex work is done have on a mini-skirt the chase

    Is on, a girl’s status is hot boys cum fitted with apparatus such as **** they

    Grab my body touch my tits a lot and lift my dress just to sniff this mess way

    Too much for me, no doubt sex’s a restraint but you came right out the paint to

    Ask for some and now I’m stunned somehow got you spunned on a dejavu

    Want my mattress to do absurd vibration while we fly like bird migration

    Love words could fry imaginations in a girl’s brains urged to try relations

    But scared to fall in love, got feeble lace but you a legal case yes kissing

    In a Court for decision a girl’s hot luck can get her locked up reminiscing

    In the bedroom, butter is witty and no other committee can spread this

    Stuff on bread and that’s enough said (Player remember I went to a crisp

    Farm Fresh boys wearing incredible bling plus the vegetables started to

    Sing were singing ‘Fresh Exciting” I was in a mini-skirt shopping in lou

    Of plenty HIPHOPPING playing MRS OFFICER my Lil Wayne he thrill

    The game with his raps a gift perhaps that can’t be copied he builds

    His reputation strong with devastation on microphones that just kills

    Other MC’S at the Farm Fresh smile and meant it heart beats a mile

    A minute my mind somehow sways nowadays have a load of strife

    In my mode of life and the road twice is rough but boys speak nice

    About my stuff girl need purpose and plan or her circus could land

    In Barnum and Ringling or a bizaare sum of bedspringing or a can

    Of kisses to be open, my emotions hidden but sex clearly written

    On my body gitting knotty with the strut got butt so kissing is fitting

    Corrupt thunder up under my skirt the worse fire starting to perspire

    Just shopping and a boy walks up said “look boo I really do admire

    Your thighs many hardcore guys want you, got cake today that I

    want to take away you deserve a break today, girl I want some pie

    If I unbutton your dress all of a sudden your breasts will be poking

    You fine in silk no decline in milk and my mind equipped just hoping

    For a date, girl you tall dame with a ballgame let me try and score while

    Other dudes take turns at bat and I’m concerned abot that and It’s my style

    To smile, look boo today give me a ride we can go play at seaside on

    The beach now he reach grab my waist oh my lace is so wet played along

    Like Cupid his love arrow is charging must escape by a narrow margin

    His words strong and all but more like a hostile telephone call dodging

    But can’t close your ear wanna hear it all, I said “my breast got you hooked

    Plus I have access to books so I can look up stuff” oh my panties are cooked
     
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    Brother Poet Rhymebad,

    Nicely done. Keep writing and I promise I'll keep reading.

    (smile)