Black Poetry : get up get down pt. 2

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Get Up Get Down pt. 2

    Kanye West Beat


    First I talk to the beats
    WE in tune like june and bugs
    How many people shoot slugs
    At my poetry
    This is life, this is hard work
    450 deep, 3 years sick, teary
    You never walked my turf
    I live a battle
    Iraqi warfare boy
    I gotta go to a higher level
    Something different than just a degree
    See I went to college to see
    Open my mind, from being blind
    And in due time
    If I keep God’s rhyme in my mind

    Woooooo

    U can’t be serious

    Get up

    Get down

    After talking to the beats
    Have a little talk with Jesus
    See that beat was my heart
    To explain it
    We all gon face arraignment
    At the end of the tunnel
    I’m trying to flow my testimony to punnel
    Funnel mentality
    Devil won’t rattle me
    How many people tried to battle me
    Defeated
    I delete ya, rebuke
    And the pain I swallow
    I puke
    In the form of worship

    See this amistad is worth the ship
    Ride
    I’m struggling to explain this life
    Somebody read me
    And maybe they see they stife as irrelevant
    A black boy with enough poise
    To be president
    No image, no dream, see my dreams lie for the crackheads
    The prostitutes, the illiterate in pursuit
    And my brothas in pursuit of fast loot, fast money
    The man jacking of to black honey’s
    Dreams beyond an eye
    My soul cry
    Fo the sky to resurrect again
    And rain
    On the path of the devil
    This is why I’m a rebel
    I need a gang
    So the streets I slang this beat
    This heart
    This note
    This spoke
    If it was murder last year
    This life he write
    Not me, but the spokesman
    For me


    THE END
    fo sure mayne
    tainted platinum
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this, with a kanye...beat
    is already hot...
    Being an avid Kanye Follower
    I read your prose even more closely...
    and I'm in awe...

    Excellent scribe...this was 10
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really like your style...
    And to the beat you shall go, ...lead and we'll follow
    tight script, your inner soul jumps out of this one...keep it comming
     
  4. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the reply guys
    i guess i have liberate myself whenever i flo
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop poet
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you got a nice style
    tight drop indeed
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To the beats you lay down a serious tune of the world around us, tight drop.
     
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