Black Poetry : Get the Plank Out Your Eye.....(read ya bibles)lol

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Apr 1, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmm should I stay or let it go
    hmmm nobody has to know
    You see it's like good ole hard candy granny use to keep on the coffee table at Christmas
    We'd be sayin,"Hmmm this one taste old,hmmmm this one has a hole."
    Now we don't care we want what we can't have.
    Then when it's not there we get to feelin' bad.
    Some say it's the stuff in the atmosphere,all them crazy folk down there on 24th street got they kids running around selling drugs.
    Me always being openminded and a mouth to match said,"Uuuuh do you not know that half them ppl ya kin folk why you ain't down there helping instead of complainin."
    Then you wanna act all holy and righteous when it begin to rain and ,and
    I slow down my thoughts
    I slow down the costs
    I slow down my complaints
    I slow down,there is no restraints
    I'm cooler than cool
    Hotter than oatmeal topped wit Granny bacon
    Catch your's before you blame a person mistaken.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bring it on down , this here had me smiling
    tyte
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx

    Like a cup of tea,uh oh anotha poem coming on,but I needa let these sit for a moment :coffee:
     
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    Dang, i'm feeling this.
     
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    :)

    Nice drop Sensual :)
     
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    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes yes if we would learn to simply self evaluate before we go pointin fingers we would be better off
     
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    hi sensual :wave: :)
    This made me think of my granny lol talkin bout "READ YA BIBLES" hehehe
    Flow on indeed.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you lol I was thinking of granny as I wrote
     
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    food for thouhgt
    nice indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you a lot
     
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