Black Poetry : get out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Jan 26, 2004.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he gets in my face yelling
    shouting these obsceneties
    using four letter words like fists
    crashing through my world
    awakening me to the realization
    that i don't need you or this
    and later when you apologize
    why do i smile as i cry
    i just went through this
    for years upon tears
    it was you holding me
    through the nightmares and fears
    now you wished i'd kill myself and end it all
    i'm miserable you say
    so you made it better
    by reminding me i don't even have you
    by reminding me i am the only one
    who holds power and control over me
    first instinct was to run
    but flee my own home again?
    and you don't even have squatter's rights?
    this here will be no fight
    just take whatever you left lying around
    and give me back my key
    telling me you'll never treat me that way again
    second chances are not given here
    regardless of what together we hold
    no child of mine will ever be told
    there mother was left broken
    emotionally, financially, spritually
    by anyone
    i no longer live for me
    and never have for you.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow..........dis was deep tyte scribing sistah
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    deep flowin
    :angel1:
     
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    Sometimes you have to split to stay sane...keep on writing.
     
  5. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So full of emotion and so real, tight drop. You have to stay strong, if not only for yourself but for the ones you bring into the world.
     
  6. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a nice drop....and I feel you with this...much love to you sis.....and stay strong
     
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    this is very tight, sister. my thoughts and love are with you right now.