Black Poetry : GET OFF ME!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PLATINUMILLITY1, Nov 20, 2005.

  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UUUUUUUUHHHH THIS IZ SUMTHIN I WROTE WHEN ME AND TANT(tantrum( WERE DOIN OUR LIL BATTLE THING LOL
    SO I GUESS U CAN SAY HE INSPIRED ME ON THIS 1

    OKAY............

    SWIPE SWIPE
    GOES THA HATERZ WHEN YA BRUSH EM OFF
    Y THEY HATIN ALL THA TYME
    DAG EVEN POPPIN OUTCHA DRESSER DRAW
    CANT THEY JUS BAG BACK
    GIMME SUM SPACE
    IM LIKE HERE TAKE DAT TAKE DAT
    JUS TA GET EM OFF MA BACK
    I MEAN CANNI LIVE CANNI BREATH
    YALL MAKE A BROAD WANNA SCREAM
    I KNO Y U MUGGIN ME
    I KNO Y U WANNA THUG LKE ME
    THA KID IZ TOO HOT
    LIKE YA FACORITE CLUB SPOT
    THEY SAY "MOMMA Y IZ PLATTY SOO DARN REAL?"
    SHE SAY "BABAY ITS CUZ SHE GOT DAT WHIP APPEAL"
    I KNO I KNO BUTCHU CA GET IT TOO
    THEY SAY "I CAN?"
    IM LIKE YEAH JUS STOP HATIN ON ME BOO
    IF U WANT I CA SHOW U
    HOW ITS DONE HOW I DO WUT I GOTTA DO
    SHAKEN EM OFF
    KEEPIN EM SOFT
    MARSHMELLOWZ JUS AINT MA THANG
    THAT JUS AINT THA WAY I SWANG
    I KNO I KNO ITS JUS A G THANG

    GOODNESS GRACIOUS
    GOOD GOD ALMIGHTY
    U MUST BE KIDDIN
    FRONTIN IN DEM TIGHTY WHITEYS
    AINT NO GAME
    I AINT NO LAME
    WATCH OUT DA KID IZ COMMIN FA DA FAME
    MIGHT NOT GOTTA RECORD OF IT
    BUT NO FOOLIN ILL DROP YA WHERE YA STAND
    AAAAAAWW NOW U WANNA HOLD MA HAND
    WANNA BE MA FAN
    I KNO I KNO I ROCK LIKE YA FAVORITE BAND
    STOP IT STOP IT U GON MAKE ME BLUSH
    ALL UP ON MINEZ LIKE I WUZ YA FIRST CRUSH
    I KNO I KNO

    C NOW THERE U GO
    U CANT MESS UP THA FLO
    I MAY BE THA KID
    BUT FAR FROM A KID
    SKILLS IZ SOOO SAUUUUCEY
    RHYMES IS SO SCARY THEY BE HAUNTIN ME
    RAAAAHHH
    OOPS DID I FRIGHTEN YA?
    DONT BE SCURRED CRAIG
    UNLESS UNLESS YA KNO I CAUGHT UP TO U
    PASSED U
    U LAST BOO
    I LAST TOO
    LAST TILL THA SUN GO DOWN N COMEZ UP
    WAKE UP PAPIIIIIIIII
    I KNO U SAD LUUCYYYYYYYYY
    THINKIN U CA MOVE ME
    I JUS GET MORE RUDE U SEE
    YEAH YEAH CHILLEN EIT MIKE JONEZ
    WHO????
    MIKE JONEZ
    IT SUCKS U WERENT THERE
    'I KNO I KNO
    BUT JUS LEAVE IT ALONE

    CHECK DIS HEA
    OKAY OKAY
    BOY U MAKIN MA DAY
    I GOTTA SIT BACK N LAUGH
    THA WIND UR BLOWIN DONT EVEN MAKE A DRAFT
    YEAH YEAH GA'Z IN IT
    BUT I THINK U FORGOT PA BK TO DA FULLEST
    WHERE U THINK ALL THAT BAD BOY TALK CAME FROM
    U BETTA ONE YASELF SON
    TALKIN BOUTTA BURNA
    THA HEATLL LIGHT DAT A** ON FIRE
    U BES RETIRE
    WHILE U STILL GETTIN BIG UPS
    U KEEP LEANIN IN YA FEELINZLL GET TOUCHED
    I PLAY RUFF BWOY!!!!!!
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, you play rough...and you got the whole floor, ...lol
    cool drop poet, thanks for shooting from the hip
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwwwww!!!
    a thug like me!
    yeap u deep from the hip big time
    flow on .
     
  4. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Plat you crazy
    Thinking I wouldn't pull you baby
    Even in my tighty whites
    You got pulled lady
    Its so easy
    Its the life I live
    The right to feel
    The emotion-It be killing the kids
    You my all-We gone ball
    Make love and basketball-Its like AW
    We can take away the games
    I bring lots of pain-Sex I mean-You know my thang
    So when I am saying I do
    Looking at mike jones like who the F--- is you
    I got a grill that magnify your mind times 2
    Fake a-- roody pooh
    I am the man what it do
    Get em off
    Bring the dogs
    Let my haters send you off
    keep it short
    keep it sweet
    Baby Plat I break you off

    Nice flow poet
    I love it
     
  5. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx queeeeennnyyyy thanxx richiiiiiieeeeeeee:smooch:

    az 4 u tant!! lol

    ha ha baby u may think
    you may wonder
    but i just gave u a wink
    cuz u thought u had me pulled under
    yeah yeah
    u got style
    might wanna drive me wild
    but its gon take alot more
    fa phatty ta fall ova board
    yup u gotta way wit wordz
    but just wordz only work wit birdz
    u gotta chip in a lil mo
    i wanna c tha sweat drip n hit tha flo
    show me y i shuld chooze u fo
    no i aint a picky broad
    no i aint a sedity broad
    u just gotta c
    im not tha average looka boy
    by tha tyme that i am dun witchu
    ima be callin u usha
    ull be singin ma booooo
    rememba tha tyme
    rememba those lines
    rememba i had u feelin tha slow vibez
    get up get up
    lemme kno wus up!!!!!!!
     
  6. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U DON TANT???????????????
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Choosing me
    Sweety you just got hooked up
    I put the platinum in your chain
    Now you feel like a million bucks
    Choose me
    Sweety I like what I see
    My lips straight intise
    I intise your fantasies
    Who keep you flowing like me
    Poets think they making love
    Until they read a line from me
    Thats the time when they eyes dont see
    Nowif you need me I got room
    A full bar-Wet bar-jacuzzi all day
    I can pull you in one take
    Watch your eyes roll back
    It must have been the hennay
    More to prove
    My show will move
    I got 10 inch desert eagle
    Im a rock star
    Atl calls me there chi star
    Im not use to begging
    So I want even start
    You got the goodies
    I got woodie
    We can do it alot
    Let me know whats up
     
  8. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TIGHTEY WHITEYS.....LOL...


    girl you got a flow in you huh...Lurk loves that....nice ta see a new 'face' around...


    holla
     
  9. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL THANX LURK GLAD TA B APART!!!!!!!!

    DUDE U GOTTA LOTTA TALK
    BUT CAN U WALK THA WALK
    MA CHAIN SO ICY CUZ OF U?????????
    WELL WHERE IT AT DUKE??????
    I WANNA C DA DIAMONDZ
    I WANNA C DA RUBIEZ
    I WANNA KNO MORE THAN HOW U GUNNA DO ME
    IF U WANT THIS RUBY
    IM NOT 1 OF DEM GROUPIEZ
    IM GUNNA MAKE U PROVE TA ME
    IF U REALLY WANT IT
    OR IF U TRYNA FRONT IT
    BENN ON MANY TRIPZ
    WHICH 1????????? TAKE UR PICK
    WHOZ THA MASTA LEROY????????
    ITS ME SHO NUFF
    WHERE YA HEAD AT BWOOY??

    UUH ILL FINISH IT LATA I GOTTA GO SUM WHERE LOL
     
  10. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UUUH OKAY LOL

    THIS CHICK IZ TOO SERIOUS
    POWA TA MAKE U DELERIOUS
    HITCHU WITTA SUM WORDZ
    HITCHU WITTA RHYME
    THEN BLOW U OUT WITTA VOICE
    N MAKE U LOZE YA MIND
    AINT NO CHEAP THRILL
    WONT BE NO MICKYZ VALUE MEAL
    COME CORRECT
    WIT MUCH RESPECT
    FA DA KID NUTHIN LESS

    UUUMM IMA WORK ON MA WAITIN IN HEAT PART 3 NOW LOL TANT COME ON WIT IT BUDDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL