Black Poetry : Get it together or else I'm gone.....

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listen brother
    I said listen brother
    Now, now wait a darn minute
    I said, "Let me speak"

    Now I aint too proud to beg now
    But see Mister I ain't no fool either
    Now I have been patient as long as this lady can be
    But see now I got to lay the law down
    RIGHT NOW
    Not tomorrow, not another second, but RIGHT NOW
    Now I have been good to you and you have been good to me
    But there is some issues at hand
    You see I got my ways and you got yours
    But yours seem to just leave me wounded
    I'm tired baby of feeling I'm loving the wrong man
    You want me to be your wife
    Be your all
    And I know I haven't been the best
    But I have given you me unconditionally
    I put up with your lies
    I put up with your unconsistency
    I put up with your so called friends
    I put up
    I put
    UP
    But it comes a time when I can't let this sleeping dog lie
    I want to change from being Ms. Nagger
    To having a mean Swagger
    But our Swagger is all wrong
    All wrong
    And see baby getting me all wet and things
    Huh it's all good baby
    But your love just and won't pay my bills
    Yeah you have me walking bow- legged
    Yeah you have knock my tracts off its welts
    But baby, I think you didn't hear me
    YOUR LOVE WON'T PAY MY BILLS
    I'm not about money but in this world it takes that to survive
    The vows say for Richer or Poorer
    It's been poorer ever since
    If I am the one make a effort, make a change
    I will too, I love you
    Love you like my beating heart
    But if I have to go on
    Then I must go on without you
    You leave me with no choice, but to give you this ultimatum
    GET IT TOGETHER OR ELSE I'M GONE.................


    NEVAR/LAVETTE112
    COPYRIGHT 2008
     
  2. AAlicia25

    AAlicia25 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You go girl, tell it like it is!
     
  3. watzinaname

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    Well sometimes it's like that, when you've given all you have within you, and it's just too much to bear. Hopefully he can step up. Well expressed poetess.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow sistah I can tell you love him.
    It reads like an old skool jam :)
    I hope things work out so he dont miss out on a great lady :)
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to all who has shown me some love on this piece:kiss2::10500:
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!





    nevar,

    Sorry nevar I got in late, hope its not too late. Great piece, you have exceptional talent!

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I feel u ever so clear
    but in tyme his change will be dear
    hold on to dat love of yours
    soon u will see his outstanding score
    keep da faith in ya heart
    and honey he will move to start

    I feel u fo real sometime one gotta say and do what is needed to make another move there feet
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you are very kind and caring

    i don't see why you waste your time with people you want to undermine you
    not respect you for the queen you are

    i don't get it

    these people need to understand this is not a one-sided issue
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I KNOW thats right....Get it TaGetha Bro Man! You see how high this food and gas is?...these economic hard times will have you lookin at your partner in a whole new light if they dont have it tagetha....or in the process of getting it togetha.

    Amen!
     
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