Black Haiku : get it together ( in 2)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Feb 22, 2007.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    always so busy
    leaving time unrelenting
    the mind in chaos

    needing to see friends
    to share loving moments-HEY
    get it together!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Display so little
    your time not shared correctly
    don't waste good moments
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A good moment that
    may not come again; take time
    to cherish the love
     
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    Hectic 9 to 5
    The corporate ladder of
    success is quite steep

    Still, we have to stay
    grounded, embracing our home.
    family, and friends
     
  5. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    get it together!
    I cry into the mirror
    mothers face appears......
     
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