Black Poetry : Get it straight.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Apr 10, 2004.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetic prositution is my conclusion to most poets who live this delusion
    that posting many peices increases their poetic thesies of so called fame.

    Naw that thought pattern is lame as a matter of fact it's insane
    straight jacket acclaimed padded rubber room with drugs in ya veins

    why yall trying to drive this short bus like it's a limo to the stars?
    This spot is about love not your im the ish look at me in awe.

    those of u who aint learned when Khas droped "New Poets 2 Da site"
    well this is ya billing company and ya service is scheduled to end tonight.
    Im jacking ya ghost writers and ya final notice is tacked 2 ya door no sike
    We reposessing ya rent-a-poems and lent out mic's
    snatching back *snaps* from ya built up hype

    Give love
    Show love
    We are love
    See love is the key
    Respect given and recieved
    Is this that hard to see?
    What's love?
    Destee is love

    Need I spell it out so u will understand it all?
    Ok well follow my lead before i pass the ball.

    Devoted
    Elegant
    Strong
    Tenacious
    Ebony
    Encourager

    So im blessed to rest my poetic jest upon her breast
    This I confess better yet profess to be the best of the best when it comes to being a family nest!
    Nothing more nothing less so stop ya selfishness and ya senselessness and use this drop as a stimulus!

    Be you poet of Old or poet of new
    Im sure u will know if this pertains 2 u!
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmm, but will they hear ya though? Powerfully put, and still, unfortunately, necessary. Let's put it this way, everyone on here has talent, let's show each other that we know this.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok i dont know what to say
    and ya know it takes alot
    to get me all speechless
    and everythang......:lol:

    but on the real :luv: dis drop
    it was laid loud and clear
    this was a poetic ride of
    getting to the point

    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u really took it to the max wit dis one
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with angel, straight up laughin :laugh:

    I'm also with watz, I hope dey hear ya.

    This is so dope, cp. Props for ya, brothahman. :wave:
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *shoutin*

    Say that Python..
    :teach:
    I been peepin out some poets floodin out other poets and jus plain floodin the room with their work. I understand if your poet of the week, I mean that's your time to shine, but please don't flood the room with 4,5 and 6 pieces at one time.I mean 2 or 3 is plenty. I love all the poets here, but we have to start giving love instead of always wanting to recieve love. Take time out to reply to your fellow poets work, show them a lil ove too.Take some time out to read New Poets to the site. Let's ALL take time to love each other enjoy each other's work.
    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks:
    Python, very well put brother :kiss:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:



    See, Imma be back when I'm done readin to make sure this one is on the top :wink:
    bbl
    Nita
    :heart:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:
    :wave:
    here it goes again.....:grouphug:
     
  8. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jus hoping this ain't bout me lol
    definately
    needs to be read
    can i steal that destee meaning?
    nah but on the real, on point
     
  9. ScorpioStylez

    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    intresting

    :eek: this form seems to be filler with alot of special and talented poets and to have such poets not show love to eachother I alwasy thought poets were a tightly nit group but me not being a poet I guess I was wrong. I hope the ones who are in violation do take this time to read and try to understand. I like your style Mr. Python. :flamet:

    "If It's A Scorpio.... It has style!"
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to the fourm ScorpioStylez

    we are built on love and respect
    thas all the bottom line
    we post reminders to let all know
    to keep giving.......indeed our brother python
    do have a style of his own....


    once more back to the top :coffee:
     
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