Black Poetry : GET DOWN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Feb 3, 2010.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GET DOWN

    To brag is a situation hot Imagination blocks reality and
    Can stop a fatality in the Twilight Zone on sea or land
    Look society in a squeeze too many variety of cheese
    Destined for your intestines and constipation a disease
    Could cause domination when it freeze up your bowels
    Hardcore paper towels are needed, farts become vowels
    True and bless to live in the U.S. it characterized as paradise
    I’m a thug known and when love is gone there’s that pathetic
    Poetic Justice it true art romantic ask 2pac and Janet so energetic
    My slang’s ready for MC’S it hangs petty thieves and appoints
    Folks to positions my quotes arouse suspicion as oil anoint
    Heads, lots of clowns are lame best be going down a drain
    Than coming up a sewer with corrupt and newer **** its pain
    Have all sorts of luck but when I try take short cuts the roads
    Be under construction so I can’t thunder with production or codes
    As planned, to carry a gun not swell but when someone tells
    You to stick em up you’re quick to duck your head, then smells
    Gun smoke, got much bling no such thing as the average infidel
    While hairdressers give perms I live and learn at any rate plenty
    Hate in the world need more love a hardcore thug will get many
    Chicks, my rhymes come to blind conclusion and time is an illusion
    Punch lines bring about lunchtime doubly so it a lovely flow of intrusion
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    These two parts was da bomb bruh !!!

    Poetic Justice it true art romantic ask 2pac and Janet so energetic
    My slang’s ready for MC’S it hangs petty thieves and appoints
    Folks to positions my quotes arouse suspicion as oil anoint



    Chicks, my rhymes come to blind conclusion and time is an illusion
    Punch lines bring about lunchtime doubly it a lovely flow of intrusion
     
  3. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rhyme scheme is nice, you got it down. Multi's is ill too.

    One,

    - Ikoro
     
  4. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY APPRECIATE THE PROPS ON THIS ONE FOR REAL YALL TRYING TO DO IT
     
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