Quiet Poetry Lounge : get da hell on

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by luvNwords, Sep 4, 2003.

  1. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for fun.............

    Get Da Hell On......................

    you called youself my friend
    but you was the one who
    was always telling me that i couldnt compete
    on my dreams i should give up
    so i wouldnt suffer defeat
    but now i can stand tall and proudly say
    that by the Grace of God
    i made it no thanks 2 you
    and now that my vision is clear
    there's still one thing i must do
    in my life i dont need people like you
    i dont need you putting negative
    thoughts in my dome
    so umm...well......you can Get Da Hell On........

    i'm not trying to mean nor
    am i trying to be disrespectful
    but there comes a time when
    you must check your inventory list
    of the people you have in your life
    and if all you're bringing to my life
    is constant worrying and strife
    then i dont have no place for you
    so i'm gonna tell you what u need 2 do
    You need to Get Da Hell On.............

    See if you're standin in my way
    keeping me from achieving my goals
    and got me missing out on my blessings
    and all you're supplying me with is
    disappointment and never ending stress
    then oops i'm sorry you failed my friendship test
    you gotta go...........Get Da Hell On................

    Hahaha, just messing around!! Just writing stuff of the top of my head, dont even know if it make sense or not.....lol
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up let one go
    forth not your troubles
    ya heart and spirit in another place
    so get gone

    tyte freestyle off ya head !
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh no it makes perfect sense, i've written 50 just like these, been there done that keep moving
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh no it makes perfect sense, i've written 50 just like these, been there done that keep moving
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved this, what a sweet way of saying...Get the Hell On! I loved it.
     
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    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    perfect sense
    loved it
     
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    :jumping: :jumping: makes perfect sense to me, hecky yah, get the bleep on!!!!
     
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