Black Poetry : Get A Grip!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, May 9, 2002.

  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say whud!

    com' again

    whud
    was
    dat?

    wait, wait 1 minute

    b'fore ya let
    nonsense slip from
    between ya lips
    check yo'self
    at least
    haf'ah gist of whud
    yo' talkin'bout

    I flow from various
    perspectives
    and I certainly ain't
    tryin' tah shovah
    verbs and nouns
    up in yo' crown
    take whud ya' can
    from my scribe
    if'n it don't move yo'soul,
    spark yo'mental
    or make ya' smile....
    den kewl
    jus' pass it by.

    it's all gravy

    I don't expect ya' tah
    groove tah all I spit
    no need fo'ya tah trip,
    ~get a grip
    wait on my next script
    ya' might dig it. :wink:



    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    even when you've supposedly got nothing to say...you say it loudly...so just keep on doin what you been doin well...

    K
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana,

    I thank you. Madd sistahly love. :love:


    Scribeaboutit!
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    Now Coco

    All I's can say is I'm

    F E E L I N

    this gurl!!!! If only you knew...just can't find words to express!


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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say that! Coco! say it loud...I think they heard!

    I must agree
    the magnitude
    of attitude be
    whiggin
    when all you do
    is flip the page if
    the scribe you
    not be diggin
    so do you thang
    Coco...go for what
    you know know
    them that know it
    flow it.......them
    that don't feel it...
    #%^& em!!!!!!!:peace:
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE ALWAYS!
    KEEP ON SCRIBING FO YOSELF...
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aminata and MsB

    This just came of the top of my head
    when I was thinking about how some readers
    ask Poets to change words or the flow to their
    work, so it would be better understood.
    It's like asking them to change how they feel,
    or think.

    Not everyone will feel every piece of poetry.
    I know, I certainly don't. :)
    But it's cool, I'll peep the next one.


    Thanks for feelin me.

    I dug'd your flow MsB. :)


    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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