Quiet Poetry Lounge : Get a Grip

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Apr 16, 2008.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U gotta get a grip on ya life
    if u plan to be someones wife
    look to which u came
    know yo heart & worth da same
    allow whom u be 2 be happy
    cause often your delt something sloppy
    and ya mind all rocky

    Get out the game of a prey
    start ya self a brand new day
    so get a grip don't let ya world slip
    into the game of some hip trip
    build ya pride on ya stride
    that u pose deep inside
    and stand up rise baby rise
    and use da depth of ya mental mind

    it's time to shine
    stop signs of being blind '
    in a pitty and cryin time
    on da multi blaze
    when u really crave da maze
    under mix confusion
    but voice up be bossy
    like rick rossy cause it can be coasty
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To thine own self be true. Like the flair in which you penned this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you , it time when one need to stand up and get a grip on the
    truth the reality and life to move on and forward.....
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :star: Whoa....This was a flow......Really flow

    Get a Grip........
    Getting a grip on life
    One of the Major things
    That keeps us alive
    I am reading this flow
    Such life
    Young ones Mind
    Gotta unwind
    Press Play to the future
    Treat life with Highest Priority
    Get a grip, Be a Majority





    uh....:welldone:
     
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    U got it sis.....nothing better then to get a grip on life's and out self bondage
     
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    You got my much approved cause I felt tha grove of belief in self so tha roads is smooth!
     
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    Thank u Emissary
     
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    I am really feeling this piece....enough to print it out and put it in my room. This is just what I need right now. Thanks Rich
     
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    most welcome ...aim high baby aim high ....the only way is up !
     
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    Wow...when i originally posted to this flow...I was in such a different place. It was a few days after I left my fiance. I re-visit now....and the meaning is so....magnified. Thank you love.
     
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