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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cascaded down, upon a breeze it was
    on a wing and a prayer
    drifting like feathers
    settling like down upon my hair

    Kissed...
    a soft encounter with lips
    gracing mine, moist
    given in between mint tea sips

    Sweet nothings whispered
    admiration murmured in a sigh
    quiet contentment
    within a joyous hushed cry

    A soft caress of wonder
    brushing against my skin
    fingertips tracing my contours
    tender tactile animation

    As you draw near
    saunter carefully
    plant each foot gingerly
    And just...be gentle with me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I promise...............

    As gentle n' mild
    capturing da love & smile
    softly steppin closer

    each pace a breeze sweep
    lifting my love off it's feet
    whispers of morrow is heard
    through da warmth of words

    I'll be tenderly gentle
     
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    A Gentle stir,
    A Gentle glare
    A Gentle Touch ...
    Can mean so much.
    Such a warm and tender piece poet...^5
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I believe you...

    Each word
    spoken with care
    like the voice of a song bird

    Lifts me higher
    than the highest tree
    that song bird is looking at me
    soaring even higher in rhapsody

    Tenderness is reciprocated

    Thank you Rich...

    Yes, queent a gentle touch can mean so much. Thank you sis.
     
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    watz:
    This was so lovely and serene.
    Very nice read indeed.

    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So glad you could find the peace within this piece. Thank you 4Everluv.
     
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