Black Poetry : GENTLY - lyrics

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  1. mfchild

    mfchild New Member MEMBER

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    Gently


    Taste the possibilities
    Of our miracle embrace
    Through the visions U see
    And this state which is surreal
    That we feel
    It’s not often one reveals
    Their deepest secrets
    Of their conscience
    This could be
    A religious threat 2 me
    Especially if this 2 U
    Is unattractive flattery?

    In flight weightless and effortless
    The thought of your kiss
    brought me this
    I’m high in the sky
    And I fear I won’t
    Know how to land
    If my insecurities
    Get the best of me
    Keep me in flight
    And if I must come down
    Please please,
    Let it be , ,
    Let it be , ,
    Gently

    Taste the possibilities
    Of our embrace
    Imagine us
    Wrapped around each other tight
    Producing multiple echoes
    Throughout the night
    Rhythmically equaled as one
    Our story could be the beautiful one
    Cloning this is impossible
    Cause only the spiritual
    Times the physical
    Could create
    Such a miracle
    Could create
    Such a miracle

    In flight
    Weightless and effortless
    The thought of your kiss
    brought me this
    I’m high in the sky
    And I fear I won’t
    Know how to land
    If my insecurities
    Get the best of me
    Keep me in flight
    And if I must come down
    Please please,
    Let it be , ,
    Let it be , ,
    Gently


    lyrics by: Paris Mark Toon 4 ButterScotch Blue publishing © www.mothersfavoritechild.com
    Please feel free to let me know what you think. [email protected]
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these are really beautiful lyrics:)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home & family u found
    welcome from above as i bless dis scribe da love
    happy u are upon us sharing come visit our chat at
    www.destee.com/chat share , flow and sho love
    welcome ;) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful!

    This is beautiful and so melodic! I love the way you handle
    this and it is so sweet and tender...as you "Gently" lay this
    piece down in the Playground!
    WELCOME TO THIS PLACE KEEP A SMILE ON YA FACE.
    SHOW LOVE AND GET LOVE IN RETURN.

    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee.....
    beautiful write...flow on...
    and bring some love...Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These lyrics were beautiful...welcome!!
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome...
    this was exactly as it was named
    a "gentle flow"....
    you captured the flow of falling
    in love so well...great read!
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, this is truly a thing of beauty, this piece here. welcome to destee! def lookin forward to readin more from ya
     
  9. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a gentle intro...

    Diggin' it, keep bringin' it.
     
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