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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling my warmness
    hearing my gentle tone
    knowing my heart
    da magic fly free

    leaving me in a
    wishful thought
    i seem lost yet close
    can't go back!
    can't go on!

    MY WHISPER
    continue on & on
    da touch seem real
    yet my hands can't grasp
    i reach & reach
    i no longer can hide
    da emotions
     
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    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my brotha,
    hold them in your heart, even if your hands can no longer grasp THEM
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    UL820 man it seeps in slowly yet i hold it in heart closer .......
     
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    This is beautiful the words of defined loved. The flow sings its on songs. Excellent
     
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    Thank u Ashanta ........surely da song it sing is of greater love
     
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    where do i do from here !!????
     
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    hard to hide whatcha feel rich hard to hide..... let it go let it flow
     
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    indeed herlove one can't hide no longer
    so openly is moves in motion .....Thankz sis.
     
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    when u face the love u feel
    it seep out like a thrill
    ya body set in a chill
    of what u really feel
    u can't hide it no longer

    shhhhhhhhh!
    not yet i can't tell who she be
    but she a woman a Queen
    here on destee's

    opppppps!!! did i say dat !
     
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    I love this
    so peaceful
    serene
    and precious
     
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