Quiet Poetry Lounge : GENTLE WATERS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jan 27, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As the rumble
    on land continue
    the quiet sea
    is still and
    water waves
    crash da rocks
    like love bashing
    my heart
    as my soul is quiet
    lone for ya embrace
    and the smile
    so my mind can trace
    in the Gentle waters
    of love as we sail
    the icy sea of bliss
    into our own sweet
    paradice
    where two bodies
    cross in love making
    like sea & da ocean
    givin birth to da pond
    i only wanna feel da
    wholesome of u
    tonight we play in
    Gentle waters
    testing our hearts
    and flashing love
    let the river cry out
    in joy for i am coming
    to make sweet love
    and caress the hype
    from da myth told
    tenderly we go down
    stream paddle flappin
    boat rockin
    gracefully to our tune
    u and i
    in da tested waters
    of love ...... :love: :spin:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    on testin the
    waters of love.....
    :angel1:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed thankz sistah for da hit on dis piece
     
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    Very cool piece man,
    "Like the sea and ocean, giving birth to the pond"
    that was it right there. You hit it on that one. Nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big thanks for the stop and showing love
    ya pen is awesome and i love it
    peace
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich...

    this is a lovely piece.

    The title is soulsoothing &
    the content took be there.

    thank you :)



    poetrysouldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u coco... happy u felt the soft gentle waves
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very serene romantic scribe, I can just see those waves....flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's what i love the quiet gentle moments
    as i vision da sea & love mixing it's beautiful
    thankz sistah Queen watz.
     
  10. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich this is a beautifull lovely piece..


    you know you always writes knock outs..
    but we are here to remind you...




    Love l :heart:
     
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