Black Poetry : Gentle feelings a Vision

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    every day i vision u
    holdin u
    lovin u
    i see da depth
    in ya eyes
    and how they sweetly
    mesmerize my motion
    i vision u like a rainbow
    so gentle sweet and
    beautiful when u glow
    i vision the sway of ya hips
    and how u make them twitch
    i vision the warmth of ya soul
    and how u kiss & fold
    the tender soft lustful skin
    touching deep within
    i want u now not later
    it's been cold lonely and hard
    without ya rapid heart beat
    next to mine
    i lone to taste ya bittersweet
    and live inside ya fulfilling treat
    touch ya body dat's soft & meek
    have u now would be a feast
    dis visional love i pose
    is a bliss of mind to hold
    i want the gentle embrace
    as trace the smile on ya face
    see a man need lovin too
    we all not dog or playmates
    dat's cool we all not a kitty fool
    or try to rule but love u right
    every night kiss ya lips say goodnight
    we need lovin and caress
    the rub on our chest
    gentle vision i see u there
    and the sheer cloth u ware
    i can't bare no longer
    time i become stronger and open
    my heart to u and let u know
    how i been loving u
    but can i have u now !!
    inside this sweet beautiful vision ? :deal: :love:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful flow
    all emotions was
    felt in this scribe
    indeed...
    i am pretty sure you will
    have this love in good time
    love this flow
    peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    INDEED IN TIME
    YET MY HEART RACE
    AND MY MIND FLOW
    TO A TOUCH A KISS
    A BLISS TO UNFOLD
    THE RAPTURE OF A
    SWEET VISION CROSS
    WITH THE COLD LONELY
    DAY BUT MY HEART OPEN
    ANYWAY TO SUNSHINE

    THANKZ SISTAH ANGEL
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gentle feelings on your mind
    Seeing our thoughts intertwine
    Needing a touch, a caress
    Could it be mine?
    Oh, but to be able
    to lightly trace
    the features of
    your gentle grace
    And watch you sweetly
    passionately moan
    I'll hold your hand
    you're not alone
    Although the miles
    seperate our pens
    I see you through
    a crystal lens
    An orb that brings
    you to my mind
    such visions of you
    the blissful kind
    Be still thy rapid
    beating heart
    The love has been
    there from the start.
    I send a kiss on
    a wing and a prayer
    hoping it will touch
    you gently there
    upon your gentle vision.
     
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    There is not a day
    That I don't think of you
    I am pulled to the light
    That is you
    The comfort
    Of you
    Feeling safe
    With you
    The warmth from you
    Is the Love
    That I absorb
    So True
    When I think of you

    The man that is you


    :))lovely scribe brother :) )

    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt the passion for her in this...
    as her heart race
    and her lips yearns
    for yours as thoughts of you
    only roams her mind
    in time the bliss of the
    rapture will unfold
    and you both will be blessed
    the cold lonely for both will fade
    and sunshine everyday
    your welcome
    love the flow....
    so ya think another one for the wall????
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....yall make a brother feel inferior! So much talent on this site...that's why I love it so much. Rich you're da man...dang....let's switch poetry books....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watz.....
    gentle sweet touch
    and a bliss to clutch
    in a romantic hush
    as it flow cross da
    orbit into the divine
    bliss of rapture
    in captivity of love
    from da sweet vision
    of tenderness in heart
    thanks sistah watz

    Bluewater ..............
    not a day pass
    that da warmth
    of ya sunny rays
    don't shine upon
    the face into da
    heart so i vision
    the sweetness of
    joy to hold forever
    i taste the bliss of
    love from da soul
    and know this vision
    is real ...thanks sistah Blueeeeeee!!

    Angel...............
    cross da galaxy of love
    my vision see da rapture
    and set an embrace to
    trace da beings of sweetness
    as it kiss the starz to light up
    a bliss of lovin from da soul
    Thank u sistah Angel for da love .

    twision......................
    Big thankz indeed sure we can trade
    da sweet relese of love books
    coz u have some tyte hot stuff and
    we mix it up together and bam!
    a masterpiece ...lol thankz man ....
     
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